Last week I had to turn off a TV programme about Armageddon...I mean life is depressing enough at times right?
I'm thinking that maybe your levels might need adjusting slightly because I had to turn down the volume and even then the bass was kicking the hell out of my speakers...It's kind of a different take on DnB for me, but there is definitely potential here.
:)
Ok, a few things. It does often seem a little disharmonic, and seems a little awkward in a lot of paces. The vocal clips a lot, but I don't know if that's the way you've mixed the track or the way the original vocals were recorded. The drums sound pretty cool though. The drop down, ambient-ish sounded awesome, and the underlying bass was pretty good.
The ending is probably the best part of the track, the dis-harmonic synths and slowed down guitar was a really good, creative way to end the track.
this has some great melodie and some fantastic beats, the bass sound is nice and raw but thats how it should be so well done! it has great structure and originality and also keeps me guessing what is coming next. the only bits im not sure about are the symbal crashes and the trippy backing music to the vocals. tighten up those sections and its a strong piece.
The cymbals were sloppy, will try tuning them into the whole vibe of the song(not willing to give up on them completely just yet, but if they still don't feel proper I'll replace them).
The first thing I would advise is to check your levels over speakers before posting. There was a very offensive to the ears buzz at the beginning :-) lol
A bit of mixing and this will be a pretty damn good track.
Hey, thanks for the feedback and the encouragement. Will play around with the levels later on today; if you mean the dick-move between 0:17-0:20 that was intentional. Figured that if I shock anyone listening hard enough at the start, the rest of the track will seem more bearable:P.
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I like that you have actually made something by usign the Lost Memories track. Please, finish the final version as soon as possible.
Cheers,
Tim
Thanks for letting me use it and for checking it out, see you around!
on You dead yet by FanaeBostan
Keep them coming
John
Peace!
on You dead yet by FanaeBostan
on You dead yet by FanaeBostan
I'm thinking that maybe your levels might need adjusting slightly because I had to turn down the volume and even then the bass was kicking the hell out of my speakers...It's kind of a different take on DnB for me, but there is definitely potential here.
:)
The bass was supposed to be obnoxiously loud, although the saw I used will be replaced, when I can put together a decent sound.
Thanks for taking the time to review the track!
on You dead yet by FanaeBostan
The ending is probably the best part of the track, the dis-harmonic synths and slowed down guitar was a really good, creative way to end the track.
Ste :)
Thanks a lot for taking the time to review!
on Cereal Doofus by FanaeBostan
john
on Cereal Doofus by FanaeBostan
Thanks for the feedback!
Peace
on Cannibal Shennanigans by FanaeBostan
on Cannibal Shennanigans by FanaeBostan
Nice Arrangement you have make here . Good Job
cheers Zappo
on Cannibal Shennanigans by FanaeBostan
A bit of mixing and this will be a pretty damn good track.
All The Best
John
Again, thanks:D