This is pretty nice, the music and the lyrics are perfect for each other. I like your approach to this by using spoken word, it really works great here.
This is a nice chilled out piece of music. You've layed the vocals niceley over the top and blended it all together really well.
Personally i think changing the genre to "chill out" would be a good idea as spoken word kind of gives the impression that it's going to be a musicless bit of poetry or something.
Just a thought.
Anyway, niceley done.
FR
this is a sound ive never heard before thankyou for making this, ive discoverd new sound! i like its chilled out feel. but it needs a powerful section added to it
the definition of a relaxing tune, great textures here i love the lyrics as well. a very effective piece with not much wrong. The guitar solo sounding part should be more raw sounding to create a contrast in the track. (my opinion only!) on the whole great track.
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Wayne
I´m still no singer, rather I try to learn.... :)
Warm regards and happy eastern dear Wayne!
Say
on Hold me by rainbow
Personally i think changing the genre to "chill out" would be a good idea as spoken word kind of gives the impression that it's going to be a musicless bit of poetry or something.
Just a thought.
Anyway, niceley done.
FR
I will do - and I wish you a nice weekend.
Warm regards
Say
PS - Me, I am only the words and the voice. The work has been done by an great artist.
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John
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Say
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