Luckyfeatherstudios

Need this beat

Dude i dig this song, i like the beat,style, and the sound of it.

totally rocks, lucky you're onto something here. I like the matching of the beat and intonation, sort of a suddent twitch of desparation which adds intensity to the track, and I agree. Very nice production man,
peaces.

This track is very unique.. i couldnt quite catch your flow, but still i caught your words and the meaning you put into them...The mixing and quality are real good...its' a very nice track bro i really enjoyed listening to it....

thanks for the insporational words

I think you did alright on this track. You need to keep working and working at it and things will keep improving, that rule applies to everyone including me. You have your own style and approach to lyrics, some people may criticise you but keep expanding and working on your style.

The music, vocals and mix were decent, you should be proud of what you've done here!!

Happy holidays, doughi boy!

Wayne

Dude I'm going to be honest cause I like what you do, but kill the auto tune and don't use it ever again! J/K ... (but I hate those freakin things) You got a good voice when you flo, but the singing is ... not so much! You need to get a better mic/pop screen and focus on the straight flo that you have and do some accapellas on here. I bet you'd get a lot of downloads. I'd use them if it was nice and clean and smooth cause your voice sounds that good to me... use what ya got man, and foget about the American Idol auditions!

Yeah man- this is really nice. Alividlife gave you some really good tips, this is great but you can hear the vocals are off (sound quality wise), when compared to music... and you got a dope voice and should play your voice like an instrument. I can hear it in there and I think you're gonna do some really good stuff, and I'd be really interested in hearing this if you redo it and just flow! Impressed fam! Checkn more out

Very well done guys and gal, the first thing music should be is fun and you definitely got that down

John

You hit some wrong notes. But good work with the vocals!

Dope track Luckyfeatherstudios. Broken Scythe came through with an ill beat. Your lyrics are tight man. And with time the flow will get better so stick with it. Nice work man.

Nice.

I likey!!!!

Can I be brutally honest?
Wanna point to two things.. and I do not want you to think "I suck"
because it's quite the opposite.

Compressor on yer vox, or .. well notice how like when you are given full attention at the mid section? And how your voice get's obviously louder?
But if you look at your DAW, what do you use btw?, but how no volume changes are going up or down?

The bass in the initial track is really really prominent, as it should be in hip-hop, but that "sucks" the mids and highs slightly.. .. just ranting for a moment, I kinda trip why it doesn't work conversly.. It's kinda counter-intuitive in a way. Bass will suck mids, but treble won't. Anyway.. humn.. you got me thinking ...

I am a nerd lol..

But ok, on your vox, if you throw a compressor on there, you will be given a balanced line of volume within that take. So everytime you say somethin' and it doesn't sound as loud as the last syllable -- it will sound just as loud. Which is great. I think almost every pro track vocal needs good compression, with very few exceptions. (It would get compressed in mastering anyway)

Oops, forgot, IF YOU can, I would sidechain the mix to your vocal take. Sidechain is... it sounds complicated, but it is like someone is riding the fader for you and pulling down the mix ever soo slightly soo you sound out over the mix.
If I had your take of vocals, and I had the awesome mix from MplusT, I would sidechain, with a narrow bandwidth focused on the frequency range of your voice. I would probably put a really easy knee on that compressor and make it very subtle, but with the compressor on your voice, and the sidechain to the mix (NOT FROM-- very important) you would sound better I would think.... Dunno for sure lol...

But yeah..
Now I want to say something, and this is coming from an artist to an artist. So do not think I am talking trash.
Practice your lines sooo much, that you don't have to think. That it becomes like... this statement you would tell anyone. You could look someone in the eyes, and just spit it.
Because It "felt" a little like you were reading it.

There's almost a comparison to acting in a way. You gotta kinda put yourself in a mental state where nothing matters. NOTHING. Not even the beat lol. Seriously, I have seen rappers Become almost someone else in the studio I haunt when they really get down to the emotional level. All the little things of their reality are stripped away man. All they have is this ONE moment to prove they are worth a damn.

....

Little did they know they could go buy a good software and do the whole thing for free lol

You got something man, just keep at it.
Do not get discouraged.

Whoa Lucky! my bro, I dig this a lot! spoken word or rap, who cares this thing is so perfect for a interlude type track bro. Hold this for when you drop a mix tape or something, because its got a great message.

Excellent track, different and has heart.
Telling you bro, its only a matter of time for you, time and inevitable practice.

This is cool. The beat is hot, and I like your voice alot. It sounds different, and its unique for real u got talent.

first off id just like to say, all the people that posted negitive reviews, it doesnt really matter. i would agree that yeah theres almost always more work to be done on any track its not just yours.

Personally, i kinda liked it, your vox really remind me of Icp. i guess my biggest suggestion, is less effects on the vox. bout the only thing i really know about rap, is that you want it to come out crystal clear, but there are songs that do have lots of effects that make it work, but just while your getting into the feel of making music, try to keep it simple. another thing is that with any kind of vox, you want to put alot of emotion into it to connect with the listener. but i think that for only a few uploaded tracks your doing pretty good for yourself! and dont let peoples negitive words get to you

I think you need a better mic it sound really muddy and muffled but the beat is hot I like this joint sounds really sinister.Joint is hard hell.

Dude, whaaaa? Where did this come from? haha This is well done! You got something working here, keep this positive flow going. I like the music track as well. Nice collab!

Wayne

spken word and a lil of rap keepo it up bro like the break too keep it up

https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/83306

mrbillionx is a hator,
he only likes rapper like marshell
or east coast hip hop, i like the track just because
i feel
the bigger pic stay kool dough boy

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im a little confused but
maybe cause im high, could u explain the style
cause mabe it should be in spoken word genre

over all the track is hot
way to spit on a offset beat
checking out more

ish i like it man good job...

Very cool phrasing with your rap...poetic style. I think the chorus would sound alot better if it where just on point...the timing seemed off a little. Its a little off-key as well, just adjust those things and it'll sound alot better. Peace

We tried man, now we see what people think. Part of the process is having a lot of growing pains, and a lot of flinches lol. Beyond if you could give some pointers for whatevers wrong thatd be great. Appreciate the listen.