umnown

That was a sweet little trip, my friend, very cool track :-)

Lol, this is awesome!

My acapella would sound weird. I'm weird and unusually. That acapella was just a freestyle probably mostly thinking out loud and how rhyme different words
i was working on a beat and had the urge to get on the Mic.

Back to your Review I like the bongos it goes with the track. This track must bump on a car system. have you tried? i think i might just go ahead and download it just to hear on my system.
Gotta love the Hypersaw Snyth.Check out my track "Ballistic" I was thinking of posting up those vocals.
Peace Thanks for your Review


*LENDY~LEN*

Well done piece and a very fine tribute to one of America's finest sons.

John

This is a good track. It would go well as an introduction to an album.

cool trak man.it's a tad dry, if ya want it to sound more surreal and gloomy try some reverb on the drums and synths and some delay on jfk's voice. that might do the trick!

It is a bit thin and DJNuckinfutz stated, but what you've got so far is a damn great start.

I look forward to the fattened track :-)

John

I like the mastering/mixdown on this one. Good job with the sound field! Needs to be fatnd up as well though (In my opinion)... like a dirty bass sythn and harder drum in after the reversed cymbal at around 1:00 to give a more driving feel. BUt you will do well if you did the panning/placement yourself because thats usually the one thing people miss on here!

Hey you suceeded! Gloomy! haha...I like this, but it's a little disturbing, Kinda depressing. But you got that emotion out of me so it's good! That's what you intended by the description I'm guessing. You should put a guitar lead part in there after the first blast to fatn it up a bit... nothing too hard but a few bends and maybe a few muted chunky chords following the bassline. Nice work!

hey dude
i think this is brilliant
love the drums, cool professional sound
keep it coming!