mdeland1

cool little jam you have there :)

Hello there
I agree with dimestop, you should try to complete the song. I do understand you had a basic idea and you worked on it and I also understand you came to a point that seems with no ideas to go on. That happens a lot. You only have to insist and it is not always a matter of inspiration. You may search for various things that might help you, for example the circle of fifths (here is an example https://www.musicca.com/circle-of-fifths). Or you may try creating some variations that mostly have to do with the sound. The bridge, the vocal stops, the creation of some lyrics more, are ideas that will help you proceed to a full song. The basic idea of what you can do, is given. And it is a good one. If that is the purpose I am O.K with it of course.
Best wishes, Anthony

you got something there bro, electronic pop nice job, catchy melody, good vocal too, go you, i always support a singer, im assuming it is you, stick another verse and bridge in it and play out with your hook, full tack you could easily drag it out to 2.30 with a couple of vocal pause's just the music, just an idea bro and i'll defo give ya a like if you bring a full track :)

ha, i’m gonna be late for today! this is why taking large amounts of rytalin is something i need help avoiding. gets the heart beating pretty fast. and you can never be fast enough when there’s no time. it’s dilemma with a beat.

This is another nice track from you. Electronic seems to be totally your thing. I would be interested to see how the track comes across with a cool video... somehow I associate it with a street chase scene. Mentalo says: keep going!

This is a nicely done track, like the reoccurring hook throughout the song. The breaks at 2:01 and 3:00 were also nice and I like the guitar treatment at the end of the track.

great job,

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nice work bro, good synth work, raspy bass and the drum track is cool, like the vocal vocodex needs to be a little louder and clearer i cant make some of it out, just a few tweaks and a bit of tighting catchy track keep up the hard work bro

of course i was always going to return the complement :)) i agree with Micky why hardly any comments this is a cracking mix. quirky is an understatement, love that intro, great synth work plenty of variation to keep you listening, solid beat and drums too the treated vocals are cool, vocodex, is it your voice underneath. the sound production is sharp as well nice job bro, join in a bit more bro i see you have 3 in your profile

I really don't understand why this thing has gotten so few comments so far. I consider it a small masterpiece. Everything about it is just wonderful (at least if you're not a bass fetishist) and I don't think I could ever pull off something like that. I also love the profile picture. Great.

what a blast to inhabit the strange character navigating this track! i lost my brain. quirky and hooky as hell. really enjoy this playing a lot!

the sounds are pure and cohesive. i for one am glad you didn’t go for an overly realistic sax sound, what you’ve produced is damn hooky in my book. vox are way cool. i’m digging it!

it’s crafty and catchy, definitely one to watch for!

Sounding nice and clear bro.
I agree with all that has posted, nice work.

Canción muy agradable amigo mdeland1, buen sonido Synth-pop. Me encanta la voz con esos efectos trabajados y ese ritmo tan agradable. Buen sonido y buen uso de sintes. Que tengas un buen día hermano. Paz y salud.

Rather happy sounding synth. Reminds me of the early 80's British electronic scene. Good one mate.