Muffin

This is mixed really nicely, nice and full sounding yet still clear. I like the reverb you used on the opening lines. Gotta agree on the bass, different line is needed.

NIce work

jc

Not bad at all! you gota alot uv talent n even more potential, and my mans rapping is killin it. Keep doin ya thang!! Have a listen to my track n tell me how u feel.

Dude you're on your way! You gotta good feel for it, can't wait to hear what ya got in a month or two!!

yeah man...ditto! I was gettin into it and I thought it was going strong flo-wise... and it ends! Dude work it out and don't get into the habit of posting unfinished stuff or you'll have a billion unfinished tracks ... And this one needs to be worked out. nice 1st track !

awwww... its over! you should tottaly finish this! it is awsome!

pretty good for a beginner! Nice use of the a capella just like John said!

Noticed you listened to a couple of my tracks so I thoght I'd stop by and give your work a listen.

Very good use of the acapellas.

Well Done

John