TheCawbShow

Cool track TheCawbShow. The beats really tight man. Your lyrics are tight to man but like others have said you just got to work a little on the flow. Keep at it. Really dope stuff so far.

nice work homie im sure she really gonna like it.. keep doin ya thang!

I'm seriously loving this track man,

Its got a really nice chilled vibe to it.

Added to Favs xD

TFO (:

did you make the beat yourself?

check me out, i got a track called Dangerous World, 1.

ah this is sweet , very cool what u did, and u have a really nice voice.

yo this joint fiyahh homie, diggin da beat and da flow, im favin it fam. i just remixed this same loop. check mines out fam. drop me some feedback!!!

Beautiful track. Great production and arrangement. Great vocals and lyrics.

Beautiful.

Faved

John

Cool track,you have nice voice,nice beat,i like it!
Keep up

I really am not a fan of this kind of music, but I admit that I listened it til the end:) So I enjoyed it.

thats it? Damn computers! I was really diggin it!! Sounds like a do over to me...cause that was hottt son!

Awesome, nice guitar sounds! This is great keep doin what you do.

Just put down the rifle and put your hands up. You have the right to remain silent...lol

I like the track, my friend

Well Done

John

Was this a freestyle? LMAOO! hilarious stuff! Eminemish type lol nice beat bro

Dude, this was Effing awesome.

Just sat back with a coffee and hit play.
Nicley done !

TFO (:

I like that old skool hip hop vibe!!
Nice!!

yo man nice track. i gotta lil taste of insanity too laid out check it if ya want.

sides, if your liking wut i got then i noticed u gotta deal 4 a collab 4 a beat. i got sum fresh freestyle i laid on it, just wish i coulda recorded sum. so hit me up bro if your feelin and we'll talk on tha flip side.
Peace
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Mr.P

yo this is a dope track man. im feelin that music on top of the beat. got a old school loop feel to it!!!

You have an artistic flow man, but you need to put emphasis at the right moments to give emotion to this. I can tell you dont have the best mic, try addin some fx effects to your vocals to clear em up a bit. Also, some of you lines might make people look away, just gotta prove you mean it.. -Peace man

P.O.P.

get the production of the music better because right now i can't really give a honest feedback just work on the rhyme scheme and flow

yo first of all, great track..
but u gotta work on that flow b, i mean i gotta work on mine too. but u kno we're the future of hiphop and we gotta do our best to get better at it. besides all the deep sh*t i just wrote, great track, great beat, aggressive lyrics and just a killer outcome. and also work on the levels, make sure a song is at its top quality when u show it to the public, kno what i mean?

to me just sounds like a free style rant to me. vocals are to high could barley hear the beat. but lyrics where not that bad, needs some work just sounds incomplete

This beat is PHIRE! MOSDEF MY kinda hip-hop!

I like your style fam your lyrics are good but
your delivery and levels are off. Delivery will come
as you rap and levels is technique so you can develop
that over time. EQ tha sounds, rework your delivery,
and reset tha levels for everything and you'll have a great
Hip Hop track!

Keep it Up

Respect from LA

musicwise wise it's good. The f bombs get a little old, and the levels are way too high! Bring em down and watch the signal clipping on the mic. Just imagine how many more places it would be heard though, if it were a cleaner version. I respect people doin thier thing. I mean it doesn't offend me or anything....just sayin... 1 time it makes a statement..2 times..eeeh...ok your angry...3 times and more....just tryin too hard. You said you wanted HONEST! That being said...great f'in track man! Just a tweak or two!