jhnn

Nice rub on this one. I like the percussions though the slow lead makes feel a bit sad. Nice work overall (nice levels too).

-Styles

Sounds like a good start to me. Could use a bumping bassline and like you said, another melody. Or at least change up the one you have. This track has a lot of room for layering from what I could tell. Add a few more instruments and some effects and this will be great. Keep up the good work! Cheers!