I like the idea behind this track! Those vocals are funny and cool! Nice synth work! Definitely a bit too much reverb on the drums. Has me tapping my feet though! Nice work!
THis is really well mixed, and i like the tune, keep up the good work :) oh and i'm listening to it on my Dre Beats headphones and can hear the depth and all the little sounds perfectly
Hi IDrop, firstly thanks for the listen and taking the time to review, I am really pleased you like, was thinking maybe it was a bit repetitive again, so nice to know someone likes it...lucky you with the headphones heard they where brilliant, thanks again :) smiles
I like the dissonance created by the vocals. You could almost take this one in other directions.....maybe break into a rock or metal approach in the middle of the song.....something that really kicks you know what.
And then bring it back from the brink.
Keep doing what you are doing. This is good work and has the potential to be great.
Thanks Bear, I think you are right, I always thought something was missing in the middle, hence the mad sound effects part, a good old rock bit would be great, a work in progress...:) smiles thanks for the encouragement...
Hey P, thanks for the listen and the good advice, I changed the genre, I get a bit stuck choosing which one, as I dont pick a particular theme when I'm mixing, just what i think fits if you know what I mean, I appreciate the words of encouragement and glad you took the time :) smiles
Thanks Alen, for listening and leaving a review. I would say all my tracks are a bit repetitive at the moment lol , as a beginner its great to get feedback though, and hopefully I will get better as I go along :) smiles
Thanks Spivkurl I appreciate the listen and glad you liked this one, I had only learnt to play the guitar when I made it, so its sort of my baby and its nice to know people like it :) smiles
Ther you GO marina ! nice to see you posting aging keep at it you will get Better as you go along always be open for tips anadvice from the felow member they love to help out! PEACE!
First off, welcome to Looperman. You will fit in nicely.
Second, I really like this track. It has tremendous potential. At some point you could really make this one special by adding a full orchestration (strings/brass) if you wanted and turn it into a full blown cinematic piece. It is still a really nice listen, and almost has a western feel to it (think Clint Eastwood).
thanks Bear, not only for the listen but, for the good advice, I didnt think of it as a western type sound but, its a great idea, and one worth trying...thanks :) smiles
Thanks Zelab, first for the listen ans for the good advice, I agree there are not enough lyrics in it, I would have liked a rap in there somewhere actually to fill it out a bit :) smiles
I think some of those vocals could possibly be taken out because of the over all feeling of the track I don't think their as needed in the main as they are their are in the break down...
the drum track for me needs to be thickened either with layering loops or adding in one or two shots...also you need to mix it up a bit it tend to get a bit monotone... so some fills wouldn't go a miss..
over all a nice idea... I'm not into this hiphop based dance as most but I did enjoy the listen...
He He shouldnt that be sister? Anyway thanks for looking i know this isnt your usual type of music, but, glad you listenend anyway. great advice, will take it on board, thanks a million :) smiles
Hi Visionarysound, thanks for taking the time to listen, I agree it needs more, only learning at the moment hopefully will get better in time, its all about trying these things, and enjoying it too :) smiles
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And then bring it back from the brink.
Keep doing what you are doing. This is good work and has the potential to be great.
Bear
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the pellas are well put together...there are a few timing issues with the rap but nothing major
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not sure I'd have put it in the ska genre...probably pop would fit it better...
anyway like I said some nice ideas...
keep 'em coming SISTER... sorry about the other review!!
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Good work Marina!Keep up
Alen
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Second, I really like this track. It has tremendous potential. At some point you could really make this one special by adding a full orchestration (strings/brass) if you wanted and turn it into a full blown cinematic piece. It is still a really nice listen, and almost has a western feel to it (think Clint Eastwood).
Nicely done.
Bear
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I think some of those vocals could possibly be taken out because of the over all feeling of the track I don't think their as needed in the main as they are their are in the break down...
the drum track for me needs to be thickened either with layering loops or adding in one or two shots...also you need to mix it up a bit it tend to get a bit monotone... so some fills wouldn't go a miss..
over all a nice idea... I'm not into this hiphop based dance as most but I did enjoy the listen...
keep 'em coming brother
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Good rhythm, just maybe needs some variation in places.
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