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dam dude this is awsumm anymoree kikasss yaaaa thankks uu kiiking itt

woah this is awesome I'm not much of a metal fan but damn this good stuff

The track is great, my friend, I hope to see you on looperman again soon.

Keep the hits coming

John

Cheerio Killers. Ha! that makes us all cereal killers.

yea,good track.. but how it reminds of early Metallica????

I really dig the way you put this piece together. I think the bass is just sik. Keep it up my friend!

brilliant work!!!!!
very powerful, a very interesting style ....
pretty unique ...
indeed you can be proud of this tune!!

cheers, rei

You have done a very nice job building this progression. This is indeed a great way to compose and provide your band with material to work on. Love the break down and I imagine some deep lyrics over the theme. I would very much enjoy playing bass or guitar to this tune. The Gods of Metal Salute You. Now go Shred for a Better World. ****4 Stars

I used to be really into rock. and this is one of the reason i was.. good job. you can also put some of your tracks on tunderground.com too for some more exposure if ya wanna. just make a profile. its free.

SpAzz

only thing i can suggest to make this track better than it already is (unbelievable i know) is mebbe you could add some screaming vocals. that would dig hardcore.

eh man i like this track it makes me wanna be in a pit a take dudes out if you know what i mean/ check out some of my songs youd like them

Oh, I really like this ^^ KudosX3

This kinda reminds me of early Metallica, good job with this one.

good job man, this track sounds great!

The machine gun beat and helicopter riffs in the beginning make this track really heavy without resorting to cheap death metal techniques. Good job.

There's some great advice here, and I also think the lyrics and voice are pretty good but I would turn up the bass and mid ranges. I wanna here more kick from the drums and a heavier, more sustained sound from the guitar. You have a straight-up metal riff just waiting to break out. Also, consider investing in a better mic.

very impressed

never new it was possible to make metal on a computer and for it to sound so real

yes, cool riffwork ....
your description is exactly right so I have not much to add ...
this track never gets boring, even though the vocals are not put in yet, that's brilliant ....
maybe the solo could be improved a little, but I don't mean the playing, that's good, I mean the sound (for my taste .... ;-))
anyway, it's good to see you back ......
excellent work man ....

peace, rei

Good to hear from you again, man. This track is definitely more organized than some of the previous but I like a lot of the stuff you've done. I generally play with this guitar tuning as well so of course I think it's awesome. Nice punishing riffs and the drums are well done. A new one to add to my favorites!

This is great! Best thing I've heard on this site so far!

not your flagship piece, but it's pretty damn good. i like all the changes and effects, some more than others but still very awesome work!

slamming pulverizing growling grooves, it's awesome! i also liked the quirky beat at the end and some of the scales, almost reminded me of my own style

awesome low heavy throbbing insanity, and i hear the "whee woo" sound in it! your riffage is fuckin tasty!

pure awesomeness, this is one of the most entertaining tracks i've listened to on looperman!