this is probably way too late, but I loved the wobbles! Especially with that melody you had going, It was really good! I'd say just add some type of synthy undertone, but it's just my humble opinion man :D Best of luck!
Hi. I'm a huge fan of this song. Absolutely loved it the first time I heard it used on a sailsuit Youtube video (that is well worth watching).
I'm surprised that you've chosen not to have a massive bassline, as in the original. There's a version of the band playing this live and there is almost no bass and it sounds a lot worse without it.
But your version is more of a chillout version so OK not to have a massive bassline.
I'm not sure that the last 25 seconds of your version work so well. Something slightly awkward about those pauses.
Maybe I can give a more detailed review once I've listened back to the original.
this song is just begging to have vox! and of course longer, you should work on a sort of intro-verse-bridge-verse-bridge-chorus thing. lengthen this sucker up. its got awesome potential man.
I like the quickness of it, it all seems to just flow together. Nice work on the percussions. I feel a bit of the "Jeopardy" theme in part of the synth/guitar.
♦ If you're looking for things to do, add a bit after the end transitioning the higher notes to sort of low E-string while rising the pitch slightly. Make it sort of sound adventurous, maybe a couple rapid chords every 2nd or 3rd beat.
This is just what I'm imagining. So it's almost guaranteed what I said is somewhat in need of editing.
As for drumming, you've probably got what it takes to match 'em up.
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on awolnation - sail remix UNFINISHED COLAB by hustlertattoo
on awolnation - sail remix UNFINISHED COLAB by hustlertattoo
I'm surprised that you've chosen not to have a massive bassline, as in the original. There's a version of the band playing this live and there is almost no bass and it sounds a lot worse without it.
But your version is more of a chillout version so OK not to have a massive bassline.
I'm not sure that the last 25 seconds of your version work so well. Something slightly awkward about those pauses.
Maybe I can give a more detailed review once I've listened back to the original.
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Nice work my friend.
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Pace...
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very good song !
peace
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♦ If you're looking for things to do, add a bit after the end transitioning the higher notes to sort of low E-string while rising the pitch slightly. Make it sort of sound adventurous, maybe a couple rapid chords every 2nd or 3rd beat.
This is just what I'm imagining. So it's almost guaranteed what I said is somewhat in need of editing.
As for drumming, you've probably got what it takes to match 'em up.
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Keep on experimenting
All The Best
John
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John
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well done
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