jettoki

Hamburg, Germany

Joined : 31st Mar 2011 - 13 years ago

Last Online : 3rd Oct 2024 - 5 months ago

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Twanna1 5th Apr 2011 20:50 - 13 years ago

on Yume by jettoki

Hello Jettoki. There is no sweeter gift to give to someone than a piece of your soul expressed through music.

I noticed the intro was 20 seconds long before the body of the music started. You could add a little beat at the 10 seconds to introduce the body of the song. Here's an example of what I was talking about. It is a track of mine call "My Lament"

https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/99716

Other than that...Great job!!!

Best wishes for your endeavor.

Twanna

jettoki replied Unknown

thank you for the advice, i listened to your song and i know what you mean now, I'ma gonna try adding some "spice" to my intro :)

thanks for your kind review and for helping me on my way to being creative

greetings from hamburg
jettoki

sauntawhreel 4th Apr 2011 05:16 - 13 years ago

on Yume by jettoki

Hello i have downloaded lots of your stuff and used it in my music cause they are very nice pls check them out and tell me what u think thanks.

MStokes 3rd Apr 2011 17:56 - 13 years ago

on Yume by jettoki

a dream of a beautiful bird in flight - sky music - winged - all respect

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