LOL with phyruis post, i'm not seeing in the description that you said it was even a drum and bass track. don't worry about him being a genre nazi though. make music how YOU invision it. not by industry standards and LONG overdue traditions. the traditions are good. and the classics will always be respected. as i respect every traditional song in every traditional genre. but were on the verge of a complete new age, and it's time for change. anyways man sheesh i like this track though, i agree with the last dude it does give off this kirby vibe. some strange dreamworld level or something. a great theme for game. i like that constant chirping sound as well. keep making music. regards
-oh okay man, i thought as much afterwards. still good track though
Thanks a lot InPSYcle.
The original genre on this song was Drum and Bass, but since a few people didn't agree, I changed it to Electronic. =]
Making it sound like something Kirby-ish was not my original intention, but I'm glad that people can relate it to Kirby. I like the chirping sound as well.
I'll keep making music man. I'm working on an EP actually. It'll be released later this month.
I'm getting a Kirby's Dreamland vibe here, and that's just awesome. It'd make for a cool Kirby vs. mash up on youtube against some of his greatest foes and maybe some Super Smash Brothers footage. I enjoyed it, but it ended abruptly. More so a reason I think it would work for a youtube vid.
Is that so? Maybe it just because of the name. =P
Kirby is my main in smash, so there is probably some sort of influence in this song. I do have a bunch of Kirby sounds from Melee I'm never going to use, though I might put them into another song that's more Kirby oriented. I'll redo this track and make it better for you guys- eventually haha.
Thanks for your input.
Yeah, I agree with you guys. THanks a lot for you input. I'll try to see what I can do with the song. and post up a newer version within a month or two. I'll make it two minutes longer.
I like the high pitched accents and melodies the most, I agree it has the feel of one long intro, but put into electronic genre it actually fits and could just be a cool eerie background music type song. Definitely a work in progress but some of the aspects were very unique and have potential.
Thank you. I'll see what I can do about the long intro thing. I kinda have to fix it, because when I closed down GarageBand I forgot to save the finished song. So the new one will sound a bit different haha. I'll fix the song in the future. I have to finish a few more before I can redo my old ones.
Very impressive for original loops using garage band! I hear the limitations of garage band in some of the mastering and noises, but you did amazing stuff with the hand you were dealt lol and the vocals actually added a lot. I enjoyed them.
You did a good job adding in various synths and melodies as to keep it sporadic and interesting.
I would work on the beats, widen the drums, and equalize the bass drum for sure, as it's tone is somewhat overpowering and
monotonous.
Thank you. I'll take what you said into great consideration. I feel the same in some respects. I try my best with GarageBand, I like it, but it's frustrating to work with haha. Lack of good synths is very annoying.
I'll see if I can fix the song in the future.
There are some interesting elements to this track which show some great potential. I would definitely follow the advice from Phyrius. You could download some drum loops from this site and then experiment with the track. This site really provides great inspiration.
wow I can't believe 9 people have listened to this and not one of them has had stones to tell you this aint no dnb brother....
the whole track has the feeling of one big long intro...
I would say that maybe you need to listen to some of the dnb here on the loop....start with people like Rollagee,RogueAi,HNMM and sn76 there really is some great dnb here on the loop enough to give you some inspiration...
don't get me wrong there are some nice ideas here but may be it just needs a bit more work to take it to the next level brother...
Thanks for the input. What I'm lacking most is good drums. I didn't want to use the drums I've used, but very few drums on looperman are what I want in a drum even if I mash loops, I'm never satisfied with the result so I just went with it. I'll change the genre. =]
Thanks for the input!, I'll see what I can do. Garageband is merciless during exporting and lowers the volume. I'll find ways around that so that you guys can have a better bass. =P
I am very impressed by this. One beef I sometimes have with dubstep is the repetitiveness of it but for some reason, your song doesn't get boring at all. The beat is very chill yet powerful. The adding of vocals to mix things up was good too. Keep up the good work!
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I'll keep working hard and create better music.
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-oh okay man, i thought as much afterwards. still good track though
InPSYcLe
The original genre on this song was Drum and Bass, but since a few people didn't agree, I changed it to Electronic. =]
Making it sound like something Kirby-ish was not my original intention, but I'm glad that people can relate it to Kirby. I like the chirping sound as well.
I'll keep making music man. I'm working on an EP actually. It'll be released later this month.
on Dreamland by SpyderByte
Kirby is my main in smash, so there is probably some sort of influence in this song. I do have a bunch of Kirby sounds from Melee I'm never going to use, though I might put them into another song that's more Kirby oriented. I'll redo this track and make it better for you guys- eventually haha.
Thanks for your input.
on Dreamland by SpyderByte
on Dreamland by SpyderByte
on Dreamland by SpyderByte
Ryan
on Horizon by SpyderByte
You did a good job adding in various synths and melodies as to keep it sporadic and interesting.
I would work on the beats, widen the drums, and equalize the bass drum for sure, as it's tone is somewhat overpowering and
monotonous.
Kudos!
Ryan
DLL
I'll see if I can fix the song in the future.
on Dreamland by SpyderByte
Keep the hits coming, My Friend
John
on Dreamland by SpyderByte
Keep it going my friend.
on Horizon by SpyderByte
on Dreamland by SpyderByte
the whole track has the feeling of one big long intro...
I would say that maybe you need to listen to some of the dnb here on the loop....start with people like Rollagee,RogueAi,HNMM and sn76 there really is some great dnb here on the loop enough to give you some inspiration...
don't get me wrong there are some nice ideas here but may be it just needs a bit more work to take it to the next level brother...
Keep 'em coming
on Horizon by SpyderByte
on Horizon by SpyderByte