SamFrench666

Nice overall production here. I like this track. Decent flows and delivery. The beat pulls it all together.

Yo, this is actually pretty cool. Def. some trip in limbo, reminds me to some Gorillaz type of vibe, which I think is very cool. I liked some parts of the lyrics and how you lay it down. Been waking up in the early 'dead' hours and this fits perfect into the scene. Real nice work on instrumental side and vocally. Interesting and something fresh. Keep at it, hope you find that last verse for the song. Thanks for sharing. Peace.

This is decent track.The beat is definitely good,i like it,got that emotional feel to it.Your delivery is good too.The mixing on the vocals can be improved though.It will be a good joint once you have a hook on it.Make the hook emotional too.

I HAVE A HOOK FOR IT FAM BUT I ALSO WOULDNT MIND JUMPING ON THE TRACK. GET AT ME AND LET ME KNOW IF YOUR INTERESTED.

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Beautiful composition. Cool reverse vocals in the beginning. The rapping tone and vocal placement was nice and perfect, but the lyrics were cliche and could use work. I personally like raps that are different than the norm, that catch my attention in their wording and I can say "Man, this guys got it going on"- I often say that about Eminem and Lacrae.

Production itself is exemplary . Lyrics were also written quite interesting. I enjoyed this track very much . keep it up and you'll have my support.!!!

Killed me on my own track lol. This is beyond awesome.

dope, killa flow n lyrical content is original hard to find this sorta stuff these days peace

This is dope af, you weren't lying in the description you killed this man, and in response to the guy before I wouldn't change a thing, and I'm not just brown nosing I'm someone that speaks my mind so if I saw room for improvement trust me I'd tell you, absolutely love it, thanks for the download bro.
change the abrupt ending and then get this sent to "radio 1 introducing" bro ! and I bet you they play it

Yo. Really like the vibe here. No idea it's going to be hip hop from those opening chords. Some big pad sound design there.

This is so slow and lazy and the pitched down vocal is very stoned and trippy.

1:37 another nice, big pad plus some pitch bend for extra drowsy trippiness.

It's pretty monotonous and I'd have added more variety and changes but I guess it's supposed to be very slow and drowsy trippy stuff so I supposed that sort of structure fits.

Might give some other thoughts later.

Good work.

P.S. Shame about that abrupt, chopped off ending. Gotta let it down more gently than that, no?

I like how this sounds; it kinda makes you think. My only advice would be adjusting the length of the intro/outro since it doesn't vary at any point. Keep it up man.

Great sample from fifty-ghetto qu'ran good shit man

Great job on mixing the tracks man, just posted another one of our joint collabos

https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/156978

over all production is trippy cool got me feeling like a hippie ,flow suites the beat well,.sounds like a clams casino production ,keep it up

Nice beat, loving the subs in this.

This is like one of those artistic movies you go see and can't quite decide if you like it. But you still keep telling everyone to go see it. I like this track. It's different, but solid. Good work man.

Nice Track moves with a real good feel...!!!

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Feelin it. Dope.

Dude this track is dope! Any way I can download this?

I recorded some guitar tracks to your Very cool Song
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/155350

That Nas sample is dope.Good beat.you got a good flow.It will be great if you good turn up the vocals a bit.i can work with you,you can check some of the beats i got here.see if you like some.Much love homie.

Nice beat nice lyrics

ILL!! ya flow is dope an these beat is killa!!bring back that real hip hop ma man!!!