its not a bad track. just like what(eshar) said you've got all the right elements here, but I think you maybe needed to jiggle them around a little. keep up the good work man
very different, not quite my taste but BIG points for originality and the mix is really well done. some of the samples remind me of MeatBeat Manifesto.
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