Zamer

I loved this piece of work.
Can you please send me the wav file!
I would love to give this a go.
iamhim.t2@gmail.com
Thanks!

I can dig this!! The flow road that beat nicely!! Nice job..

nice sound

If you'd like to listen to what I've worked on heres a link
https://soundcloud.com/wolfmixes-1

But I'll work will ya man this is a sick beat..

Quality track you've made here. Everything just fits together perfectly.

Nice filter build up intro. Hittin ma sweet spot. faved.

No drop :( But still sounds cool ;)

I too was at your point a few years ago, and now looking back I do not regret anything. Whatever you choose...as theHumps comment says....give it 100%. It's a beautiful time to be at your stage in life with so many options. Follow your instinct and heart on what you want and everything else will fall into place, trust me. Whatever you do...please continue your passion with music. You've got a good ear. Loved the track:D

Sorry for a late answer:
It's a really promising start, I can't think of anything to change in it really other than continuing the track. Make it longer!

*listening again*
Or you could maybe create more tension and realease in the soundscape with automation and EQ'n...I don't know the right terms for it nor do I ever manage to do a good job on it my self but I'm thinking about having the sounds float around and change troughout somehow, if that makes any sense.
Play with the frequencies.
That could be cool.

Or not!
It's also good as it is.
Cheers!

Hello ....

All I can wish you .... For this young "novice" life, and after reading your long presentation, is to succeed as well as what you have done here, musically speaking.
It's short but very promising .... Good luck.

Dan

Whatever you decide to do, give it 100%. Whether you reach your highest goals or only some of them, you will know you gave it your all. That builds character as you grow.

It's great you are at an age and have some choices, don't follow people for their reasons to do something, follow your heart and do what feels right. Then give it 100%.

Good luck, my journey through life was a blast, no regrets and the best is yet to come, I'm retired in Daytona Beach!! Have fun, make smart choices, take chances and you won't have any regrets later in life.

Cool track, catchy, fun, liked it a lot!

Wayne

You are creating some really neat sounds here, that's what you are doing Mister.

A very good start, I would like to hear more.

Sometimes less is more!

This moves along quite beautifully!

Very nice and chilled piece!

Good work!

***bb***

very fresh drums and synth and stuff, great mix

A nice remix!
Loved the piano chords and the melody overall.

Woooah!! This is epic, I love the build up!! Some vocals would totally finish this off, awesome work :) !

Coo ill have a upload soon

I downloaded this track when u first posted it a couple of days ago, I didnt read the details until just NOW! Man! Your friends must all b n2 Soulja music r something & not know what gud music is! smh. neWay, the reason I came back to comment was 2 ask u if it would b ok 2 throw a lil of my swag on it? Well I already have, I just need you & Steph's approval b4 moving forward. I'd like to put ur version, with my flows on my project 4 LOOPERMAN. https://www.looperman.com/forum/thread/180058/looperman-soundtrack ??? Ill upload the song later 4 u & Steph's go-head.

One of my favorite stations on Pandora is the dubstep station. I swear, if someone played this and told me we were listening to that dubstep station, I would totally believe them! This is awesome! It does need some work- almost more energy- but you're headed in a very pro direction and the fact you are willing to take the track back to the drawing board so to speak just says what kind of artist you really are! Can't wait to hear what more you do with this!

I loved that as it is!

Sounding nice n chilled to me!

very good work for first shot!

Sweet vibes man!

Nice work,
good ambient sound!

I think its awesome:)...So i downloaded it.. but if you play in for ex. windows mediaplayer it sounds very "muddy"(beacuse of the bassbooseter). You can also hear the muddy sound if you listen carefully on the looperman player.
Also the vocal drowns in the synths

So if you want to remove the muddy sound, then you should put a highpassfilter on _every_ channel, because every vst-plugin vil generate a little basssound, and these basssounds you cant will make a muddy sound.

Try to search highpassfilter on youtube. After you have done tha, it will sounds much cleanere :)

my email is x2obsessed@hotmail.com

hay dude i would love to do a remix if u use fl studio send me the flp or if not u can send me the stems if thats cool

I'd like a go at remixing it. Could you send me stems?

Neezle