Paulo, man.......... once again you prove you are a very creative individual. I congratulate you for that. The track is very interesting......... Cheers!
The vocals are rubbing this track wrong. They seem like they would work, but the timing is off or something. They could also use some reverb.
I would try writing the vocal melody with a keyboard to get the notes, then sing to the keyboard line. Sounds like you're not sure of what notes you're doing, or it was not really "written" or planned, besides the lyrics, which are fine.
This is just my thoughts on it. I like what you have going and I hear what you're going for, but the vocals just need some work.
Looking forward to hearing this when it's further along.
Hi. Tanks for listen and comment.
It would be great to add your vocals to this trakcs.
The current vocals are "loops" so its hard to fit them to the track. SO, your are right when you said they are "wrong".
You can contact me at xmafax@gmail.com
Cheers
Paulo
I would love to throw my vocals to your songs! You jam hard bro! i LOVE YOUR STUFF!
I've been a metal singer most of my life. Where can I download your songs so that I can start??
HI. THanks for your comment!
Please send me an email to xmafax@gmail.com and tell me wich tracks you want throw your vocals.
You can check them all at www.soundcloud.com/xmafax
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The vocals are rubbing this track wrong. They seem like they would work, but the timing is off or something. They could also use some reverb.
I would try writing the vocal melody with a keyboard to get the notes, then sing to the keyboard line. Sounds like you're not sure of what notes you're doing, or it was not really "written" or planned, besides the lyrics, which are fine.
This is just my thoughts on it. I like what you have going and I hear what you're going for, but the vocals just need some work.
Looking forward to hearing this when it's further along.
It would be great to add your vocals to this trakcs.
The current vocals are "loops" so its hard to fit them to the track. SO, your are right when you said they are "wrong".
You can contact me at xmafax@gmail.com
Cheers
Paulo
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I've been a metal singer most of my life. Where can I download your songs so that I can start??
Please send me an email to xmafax@gmail.com and tell me wich tracks you want throw your vocals.
You can check them all at www.soundcloud.com/xmafax
Cheers \m/
Paulo
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I am waiting for this
Paulo
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The consensus is in, this song is dope. FT