I really liked how it turned out! Thanks so much for your time and effort. Is there any way I could get the drums set to download as a separate track for mixing purposes?
Needs a few more elements, time segments to add Colour, Flavour...
Like some Salt and Pepper to give it some pop...
Vocally it has a somber feel to it, Lyrically it could've gone either way...
Thanks, I do agree it could use a little more something but this is at 70bpm which is half the normal tempo im used to, I will probably edit it a bit more in the future if Austin would prefer that but for now I will just stick with this :) thanks for your feedback.
Mate interesting track, for first attempt not to bad, vocals don't seem to fit right in the first part of the track, but when beat changes @ 2.30 minute mark, vocals work very well, could not quite pick out why when listening, but something just not right in the early part of the track, keep going at this genre, look forward to see what you do next with this genre wise, not a genre I do often or well, but have improved with each attempt at the genre, well think I am improving also by comments received...Peace n Respect...Mosaic...
Thanks for the feedback dude, I do agree it doesnt mix all to well, and that is because I didnt mix it, I just completely forgot on this track. Alot of my earlier tracks(even though this one was made less than a year ago) were just more like experiments, seeing what worked for me and what didn't, this fell into not great with vocals and mixing DnB. But I have gave this genre another shot(Storm of Life) and I think I have improved :) Peace and Love...TheRiot504 :p
voice is not suited to the rhythm as well music.need adjustment in tone. in general it's a good job. Sorry for my English, I am not strong in this language)))
That's funny cuz the voice was written and sung over this instrumental, usually its the other way around lol but yeah, the instrumental was just a quick song so its not catchy so it doesn't mix well with the vocals. P.s. your english was fine.
I'm actually loving the sounds used in this, has a great melody. Mix has some clutter though, needs a bit of tweaking and it'll flesh out a lot better. An edit to the bass can also help with this. Still great work with the melody and synths, peace
Why thank you :) I do agree it could have been mixed better but im not of fan of mixing, so usually my "quick" songs are hardly ever mixed. But i'm glad you like the melody, I try lol.
Reading your description:
So it's a holiday there all year long I guess....
All the people and places they've blown all year long, they must
celebrate independence every day....lol
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Like some Salt and Pepper to give it some pop...
Vocally it has a somber feel to it, Lyrically it could've gone either way...
Overall a good start, keep going....
Peace...TG.
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Mate interesting track, for first attempt not to bad, vocals don't seem to fit right in the first part of the track, but when beat changes @ 2.30 minute mark, vocals work very well, could not quite pick out why when listening, but something just not right in the early part of the track, keep going at this genre, look forward to see what you do next with this genre wise, not a genre I do often or well, but have improved with each attempt at the genre, well think I am improving also by comments received...Peace n Respect...Mosaic...
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Gramo/Neo
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on TheRiot504 - Shoot for the Sky -Land on the Moon- by TheRiot504
So it's a holiday there all year long I guess....
All the people and places they've blown all year long, they must
celebrate independence every day....lol
Good work...
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on TheRiot504 feat Courtney Hyan - Limitless by TheRiot504
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