Pwnone

Hey man this is a sweet track!

Yo the track sounds dope. Reminds me of some old Eminem ish. I know what you mean about touching up the production. Your vocals are pretty good. I think your voice could use a bit more inflection here and there. The rhymes sound a bit like a free style. All in all, not bad for a rough cut. Keep it up!!! P.S. If you need beats, I'll be selling beatz on my myspace page soon. www.myspace.com/ils7

beat basic, but excellent starter. keep pushin homie...

Good solid rap, I like dat playa

like is a matter of taste,keep it up
i agree on the clap its over the top

Whack? Not at all.. this was actually very cool. I have an 11 year old who sings and plays guitar, so it's always cool to hear youths on songs. Really enjoyed this track.

Nice track man. Pretty sick that you got a kid on this, still serene, they dont talk about guns as much :P My one peice of con-crit is to turn that clap down, it beasts out too much, and it could kill your ears off sooner or later :P Tight choon tho, keep it up.

Thats pretty tight