FaridHumanoid

first part is great. the rest is kind of eh.

Nice work

Np man you have an amazing talent never let any one say you cant make it!

Great song

hi farid , i'm iranian like you ... this is awesome ... i wanna make hip hop beat on this .... gimme a mail address to show you

Farid, first let me say thank you for introducing all of us to this marvelous instrument. It has a beautiful sound, especially in the hands of an expert :). Like Ed said, it is amazing that this was recorded on a webcam microphone....but also shows that you don't need a bunch of fancy equipment to make a great recording.

Really well done!!! Keep making beautiful music. I hope all is well.

Bear

Hi Farid....It is a pleasure to hear a different instrument performed with feeling and skill...I think emotions of the heart and talent always produce the finest music...The setar is new to western ears but I know it has been around a very long time...it`s sound is a bit like an instrument we call a dulcimer (used often in traditional north american acoustic music...country, bluegrass, etc)...It surprises me that this was recorded with a webcam microphone as it sounds nice and clear....Well done my friend...I am sure your lady will be happy with you...Ed

Farid I have listened many of ethnic tracks in looperman , and I think as our friend Behnam has told this is a masterpiece this is one of best looperman ethnic tracks because is really played . i congratulate Elaheh for this . very nice.

hey Farid bro this is really nice to see you have composed this track for your lady .say my hello to Elaheh too .
godwilling you will have a nice love forver.i think to a track with my guitar and your setar too .even a heavymetal but with setar too . have a good night my friend.

Hey ! have I got it righT? U mean Elika is the same your Elahe ?so seems team should make a song in honour of her presence in looperman ! I'll write a PM for U both ..

I am proud of my self to be the name of your song and to have you in my life babe... Love u.

Hi Farid, this is very good track, you shoud upload more,

my dear friend + Elahe both .
first forgive me for having no chance to write comment earlier for U dears .& then an exclusive congratulation to Elahe for having such a masterpiece as remembrance of your love .
I reallY wish your stanch love stay forever & ever.
& according to Farid's tendency to persian literature I'll write this from Rumi here for U both:
“Out beyond ideas of wrongdoing
and rightdoing there is a field.
I'll meet you there.

When the soul lies down in that grass
the world is too full to talk about.”

poem by Rumi .

and well in the end ,duste kopole man yek ahze boro kenar man be elahe ye chizi begam :
Elahe jan,age did yek lahze bi tavajjoh shjod,bad harf zad,akhm kard,ya dast az pa khata kard,hich khodeto aziat nakon , ye eshare bekon ma inja be surate international ba ham collab konim nesfesh konim ..sare vazn ham miad unjuri.
va dige inke khoshhalam mibinam baes shodam ba Carole dust beshido(agarche Farid be zahmat oftad) khabaraye khub shenidam dar morede tarjomeye ketabe Carole .
take care about eachother .take care abouT your subjective
& objective details & health , & appreciate love this only
alive word of our existance.
best wishes of mine for U , love , and your permanent love.
____Behnam

hi Farid
how r u doing ... ?! :)
this track it very beautiful
keep on the good job :)

hope to hear more from u soon :)

TC bro
c u then :)

Hi Farid,
Thanks for sharing this with us: the "setar" is an instrument that we don't happen to hear often.
I find this instruments has a very "sad" sound.
Peace, Domenico

It's really refreshing to hear a track sounding absolutely live, which is real rarity here and more so when it features a less known instrument. It was a pleasure to listen! Thx!

Orlando

Hi Farid, my dear friend .
I "jumped" on this when I saw its name ;)
Though I'm not used to listen to / and don't know much about setar, I can figure out how difficult it is to play this beautiful instrument . I love these harmonies I'm discovering through your track which "breathes" a lot through pauses and more impetuous moments . My spirit travelled far away while listening and I thank you for that trip .
Hope you're doing well,
Mibousamat to you and your closest ones,
Take care, my friend .

Hey - no problem. If you have a look at my comment history, I almost always give a decent analysis of a track, with exact time references and I try to make suggestions for how I think it can be improved (occasionally I don't have any suggestions). I only comment on tracks I either really like or think are good but could be better.

I love music very deeply so it's easy for me to write out some thoughts on a piece of music. And I could easily make my comments longer. I don't understand what the point is of people giving one sentence reviews/comments such as "I like it" or "This is really good". That's not helpful or interesting, though maybe it makes the person who made the track feel a little bit better.

Anyway, I thought your track was good but perhaps has too many different sections in it. Maybe you could split it in two and then extend those sections into their own tracks. I don't know really know - I'm just making suggestions based on my feelings. You may completely disagree! Good luck with whatever you decide to do.

I vote to it my friend . specially that intro is so familiar for me!having no guess where I have heard iT Chaghal!(lol).
here is raining . i am thinking to you and your horny dance on under those old tables at Sorento and this music makes me fall in love with you.you looked beautifull with that make up and that pink one and this music is great.aunt Krol soon will ask you if are you married or single if you keep on such wonderfull tracks lol. i love you in that pink one and this track both.specially in the nightS!i'm glad Mohsen didn't know english otherwise one of the us had been killed.
oh but seriously I've missed my kindheart friend.my wife has
standing here & laughs ,tells is this a real lawyer ?!
but i prefer more to ask you about taahol ya tajarrod.
Wish you and Mohsen both will forgive me for this kiddings.

PSYCHO :D Love It!

Some classic evil riffs here. I guess you must be in a low, dropped tuning (I always play in drop D but it's DADF#AD - my blues slide tuning) and maybe it's a 7 string guitar.

The little ambient breaks are strange but give the track a certain character.

1:43 I wasn't so keen on that tom break. Thought they should have been playing double time. Maybe get some double bass drum in there too.

2:55 I think you can make that guitar more powerful - EQ, stereo widening - things like that.

3:24 the lead part that comes in is strange. Quite ambient, maybe it's a guitar. Sounds a little like a piano but it's probably not. Also weird synth stuff in there.

Oh, I just noticed this is all loops. It's definitely a collection of ideas, doesn't really have any obvious structure.

Last section, starting 4:31 is probably my favourite. Quite dreamy with that main sad guitar part. Good soundtrack music. I'd probably rather have that last section taken out and turned into a whole piece on its own.

I also like the very final sample on 5:53.

Aw yeeeeaaaahhh !!! Whenever I hear such guitar riffs, I turn into a hysterical head nodding heavy metal fan !! haha
Woooh ... ! In-cre-di-ble track, with that lull that keeps the tension to its maximum level .
Thx a lot for this,
Cheers :D

HOLY SHIT THIS IS FUCKING BAD ASS. If i can manage ill put some bad ass vocals to it if i can go Disturbed style..

Wow, this really does take you on a journey doesn't it...

Oh hell yes!!!! This is what Looperman has been lacking. I've been looking for the heavy stuff on here, then I saw that you are a friend of Behnam and Tonality. You are now a friend of mine. I love what you do. The changes are refreshing, though not very consistent in volume, energy and clarity. The ending it just great. Thank you for this.

Evan