Hello TJ,
This track is a brilliant concept, but for me really the track should start from 1:09?
If you could also match the tempo of the loops as well you will have a hit my friend.
If you do need anything, please just PM me.
Great Job anyhow.
Jamid
Thanks for the feedback!!!
Yeah, i thought about giving some intro sound...like not totally necessary. I was just playing around.
Sometimes, there are tons of concepts flowing and other times, I run out of ideas. So, these phases are seen in portions of my tracks. If i get some more time, I'll definitely refine it.
Oh, and i'm looking forward to seek your advice. I'll definitely contact you during my next music session.
Okay, I've got to say that this song fit my mood today perfectly! Was velocitizing to prepare for the momentary future, and this just flowed right along side me. Super cool and sensitizing. Deep. I could have listened to a much longer progression of this, you need to put out an EP. Great stuff! Fave!
Good production TJ. Very nice intro with the gated synth floating into the tgrack. The drums fit very well(nice reverbed clap). The build up in the middle is very very nice but maybe a bit long.And when the arpeggio comes in you should give it a bit moe space to come in the track. You could lengthen the volume automation there. Last thing is that the ending is very abrupt. You could use for instance an impact or crash sample to give it a bit more logic ending. For the rest a great track. Favoured it!
thank you mudhoen for listening to my track
understood your view points and will try to incorporate them.
actually,this track is a 'work-in-progress', hence no such ending has been given.
thanks again
TJ
Ballroom dancing too at the Blackpool Tower Ballrooms in the North of England..
I'm sure you have no idea what I'm talking about but that's understandable.
Just listened again and it sounds nothing like a cinema Wurlitzer but ... it still paints that picture ... still creates that mood which is a million times better than actually sounding like one.creates that mood and moment.
sorry i couldn't carry too much of that feel sir,
but i am happy that i could evoke some kind of nostalgia (unknowingly)
i somewhat know what picture you may be painting in your mind...(maybe)
yes it's weird that this connects to something as long ago as 7 decades...but then, that's the magic of music :)
thank you for giving time to listen to my piece.
TJ
For me to enjoy music I have to feel something experience something.
Doesn't matter what it is ... sorrow joy wonder desire fear the urge to dance ... I have to feel something.
One of the reasons I can't get my head around a lot of pop music ... pop music of all kinds from all ages ... some is fantastic most is bland and doesn't do anything for me.
This piece for some reason took me back to the black and white films of my fathers time in the nineteen forties and fifties ... how weird is that?
I have an inking why.
Up to the 1.30 mark there is a kind of Wurlizter swirl reminiscent of the old cinema organs.
Before the film started in many cinemas an organist would appear as if by magic through the stage floor playing music while you waited for the film to start.
I saw this in it's last days as a small boy in the 50's and this is where your music has taken me!
At 1.30 the spell is broken unfortunately as it goes all modern and I'm back in the now.
But thank you for my little journey back to the black and white days.
Thinking first track reviewed of yours, great intro, beat very nice, nice synths, to me it sounds like a blend of genre's, in a good way mate, plenty of variety, sort of have to echo DJSLTUK thoughts about maybe more continuation of the beat especially the first beat that kicked in to give it little more flow, basically would keep your elements the same but break track apart, add extra beat sessions into the mix, with the great sounds you have going here, with those sort of changes reckon this track would be a good listen out to about 5 minutes plus or even more...Very impressed with the first track heard from you...Fv...Peace n respect...Mosaic...
thanks mosaic for listening and appreciating my work
actually this is my first chillout track(or for that matter my first track after some 15 months.
i get what u want to tell,but i have a somewhat different opinion - i personally think that variations make it interesting for the listener [you can see that from my other tracks too].
anyways,thanks again for your inputs.
TJ
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thanks for listening and appreciating
Thanks for the feedback, would surely consider it.
TJ
on Tropikal by 25DjTj
This track is a brilliant concept, but for me really the track should start from 1:09?
If you could also match the tempo of the loops as well you will have a hit my friend.
If you do need anything, please just PM me.
Great Job anyhow.
Jamid
Yeah, i thought about giving some intro sound...like not totally necessary. I was just playing around.
Sometimes, there are tons of concepts flowing and other times, I run out of ideas. So, these phases are seen in portions of my tracks. If i get some more time, I'll definitely refine it.
Oh, and i'm looking forward to seek your advice. I'll definitely contact you during my next music session.
Thanks a lot again,
TJ.
on Tropikal by 25DjTj
on Tropikal by 25DjTj
anyways thanks for the feedback.
TJ.
on Tropikal by 25DjTj
on Tropikal by 25DjTj
on Tropikal by 25DjTj
Yeah some people here told me to continue the same sound for most of the track...so i'm just trying it out.
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and welcome to looperman
TJ
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TJ
on Awakening by 25DjTj
thank you for your feedback..
glad you enjoyed it
thanks again
TJ
on Awakening by 25DjTj
glad you liked it
TJ
on Awakening by 25DjTj
TJ
on Awakening by 25DjTj
Gramo/Neo
TJ
on Awakening by 25DjTj
understood your view points and will try to incorporate them.
actually,this track is a 'work-in-progress', hence no such ending has been given.
thanks again
TJ
on Awakening by 25DjTj
This is a nice job at editing and arranging all that into a cohesive mix.
Well done
Jamid
TJ
on Awakening by 25DjTj
TJ
on Awakening by 25DjTj
I'm sure you have no idea what I'm talking about but that's understandable.
Just listened again and it sounds nothing like a cinema Wurlitzer but ... it still paints that picture ... still creates that mood which is a million times better than actually sounding like one.creates that mood and moment.
but i am happy that i could evoke some kind of nostalgia (unknowingly)
i somewhat know what picture you may be painting in your mind...(maybe)
yes it's weird that this connects to something as long ago as 7 decades...but then, that's the magic of music :)
thank you for giving time to listen to my piece.
TJ
on Awakening by 25DjTj
Doesn't matter what it is ... sorrow joy wonder desire fear the urge to dance ... I have to feel something.
One of the reasons I can't get my head around a lot of pop music ... pop music of all kinds from all ages ... some is fantastic most is bland and doesn't do anything for me.
This piece for some reason took me back to the black and white films of my fathers time in the nineteen forties and fifties ... how weird is that?
I have an inking why.
Up to the 1.30 mark there is a kind of Wurlizter swirl reminiscent of the old cinema organs.
Before the film started in many cinemas an organist would appear as if by magic through the stage floor playing music while you waited for the film to start.
I saw this in it's last days as a small boy in the 50's and this is where your music has taken me!
At 1.30 the spell is broken unfortunately as it goes all modern and I'm back in the now.
But thank you for my little journey back to the black and white days.
on Awakening by 25DjTj
Congrats_____Orlando
TJ
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TJ
on Reboot by 25DjTj
Thinking first track reviewed of yours, great intro, beat very nice, nice synths, to me it sounds like a blend of genre's, in a good way mate, plenty of variety, sort of have to echo DJSLTUK thoughts about maybe more continuation of the beat especially the first beat that kicked in to give it little more flow, basically would keep your elements the same but break track apart, add extra beat sessions into the mix, with the great sounds you have going here, with those sort of changes reckon this track would be a good listen out to about 5 minutes plus or even more...Very impressed with the first track heard from you...Fv...Peace n respect...Mosaic...
actually this is my first chillout track(or for that matter my first track after some 15 months.
i get what u want to tell,but i have a somewhat different opinion - i personally think that variations make it interesting for the listener [you can see that from my other tracks too].
anyways,thanks again for your inputs.
TJ
on Reboot by 25DjTj
TJ
on Reboot by 25DjTj
hope to entertain you in the future.
thanks again
TJ