Nice track, YungWillCPR. I like your flow and hook. If I had to critique I would recommend lowering the hook into a deeper pitch instead of a higher one. Other than that I find this a fun track to listen to. Keep going!
Enjoying this very much, and it helps me realize that you probably have some indication of what I mentioned in my reply to your comment on my song. This makes me happy! Your song also reminds me of my recent participation in a city council meeting... before the meeting, they had everyone stand and repeat the pledge of allegiance. My wife and I were the only ones in the room who did not recite it. It is thoroughly offensive to me to pledge allegiance to a god I do not believe in, and who has no place in politics... not to mention pledging allegiance to a government which does not hold the well being of it's citizens as dear. They do not deserve our allegiance any more. Thank you for sharing this inspiring song! I like it a lot! Fave and DL!
This is a fire track! I'm all about the message. My only critique is that you play with your EQ settings to reduce the amount of "pressure" in the track (the thudding, sub/kick action - unless of course that's the effect you were going for) and your panning and stacking to make the hook pop.
Sounds great.
Really nice job on the vocals, you got a thing for those ;)
The drum sounds a little weird to me though, maybe a little too much of a distortion for me. Possibly you could add in some low end for the drum
thanks for sharing and I will keep an eye out for new tracks
Hey Johhny...Thanks a lot man for listening and giving me this great feedback. Oh the drum I used has a bit of distortion yeah..It was an idea to make t like that..but i get what u saying maybe yeah tweak the low end a little bit. I deeply appreciate.
Tight track YungWillCPR! That beat is dope and your flows are sick. A head nodder for sure. The mix sounds pretty good too. This one's a Fav. Nice work.
I always like to home in on tracks that didn't get much attention first time round, Nine times out of ten i can't figure out why they didn't and yep, this is one of those times.
This track is f***ng excellent. Your vocal skills are excellent. Your style of vocal reminds me of tricky from massive attack in this tune.
The mixdown is brilliant, the score is well written and it's incredibly professional sounding from start to finish.
Really enjoyed this track, i'm downloading it and i'm hoping you've uploaded some acapellas now as i want to use your voice.
Cheers for sharing.
FR
Hey FR!! wow man I'm so humbled. Thanks for listening and for this best feedback.. this coming from someone who knows so much bout music makes t carry more weight. much respect fr you man. I haven't yet uploaded any but I'll do so ASAP and I'll let u know. you are very free to use them..Thanks so much!!
I like the lyrics and the vocals.
I admire your creativity and skills. :)
I like how you say: "It was written in the sky...." the whole chorus...I like the rhythm and I did enjoyed your song.
Good luck, Will.
You certainly know how to rap my friend. The lyrics are good, the pace is relentless and i have to respect the amount of time it must take to write four minutes worth of lyrics.
The back beat is good with a good mixture of instruments.
The piano and violin compliment each other very well and the big bass drum gives it that extra oomph!!!
I can't pick fault with this so it's 2 thumbs up from me.
FR
Nice job on the words and vocal deivery YungWill...its a nice smooth mix and I like the piano...Please take it as constructively intended...but I found the music mix got quite repetative after the first minute or two...It stays in an A minor key all the way through....I think you would really kick it up a notch by just doing a couple of key changes...or maybe a little progression like Am-C-G-Am would work a treat and you wouldn`t even have to change the vocal...anyway...a big well done to you...melodic hip hop raises the bar....keep on doing it.....Ed
Hey man... thanks a lot for the feedback..and wow u just opened up a whole dimension to it.. I appreciate a lot. Thanks a lot Ed. It's coz of people like u why we at looperman.
not an experT in such genres buT beyond anything impressive heartY exedcution is notable & sensible . nice to meet U again tallented YungWillCPR .regards___Behnam
Yeah, I just fumbled that comment. That is the downside of editing while typing, LOL. What I meant to say in the line I flubbed is: "The distinctiveness of your voice, coupled with the way you use it,makes for a very distinctive style that sets you apart from the rest."
Hey Mykael..wow man I'm humbled..this is the realest feedback I've gotten here!! Thanks for the love n for the honesty. let's keep doing our thing, our own way and not follow the crowd! I appreciate so much.
I may not like some of the lyrics, but I CANNOT deny you SLAYED this track! Awesome production. You've got a very The distinctiveness of your voice, coupled with the way you use it,makes for a very distinctive style that sets you apart from the rest. I could definitely see this track being offered on iTunes. It's just THAT good! Well done!
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This is a fire track! I'm all about the message. My only critique is that you play with your EQ settings to reduce the amount of "pressure" in the track (the thudding, sub/kick action - unless of course that's the effect you were going for) and your panning and stacking to make the hook pop.
Other than that, keep it up!
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Peace !!
Jody
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good work tho
Jody
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Really nice job on the vocals, you got a thing for those ;)
The drum sounds a little weird to me though, maybe a little too much of a distortion for me. Possibly you could add in some low end for the drum
thanks for sharing and I will keep an eye out for new tracks
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This track is f***ng excellent. Your vocal skills are excellent. Your style of vocal reminds me of tricky from massive attack in this tune.
The mixdown is brilliant, the score is well written and it's incredibly professional sounding from start to finish.
Really enjoyed this track, i'm downloading it and i'm hoping you've uploaded some acapellas now as i want to use your voice.
Cheers for sharing.
FR
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I admire your creativity and skills. :)
I like how you say: "It was written in the sky...." the whole chorus...I like the rhythm and I did enjoyed your song.
Good luck, Will.
Oxy
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The back beat is good with a good mixture of instruments.
The piano and violin compliment each other very well and the big bass drum gives it that extra oomph!!!
I can't pick fault with this so it's 2 thumbs up from me.
FR
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So, strike out that "You've got a very" portion.
Love & Light!
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Love & Light,
Mykael
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Can I produce a beat for you?! Check it out my soundcloud profile:
https://soundcloud.com/max2jack
Respect!
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