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WONDER!

I actually think I could master this for you. Could I try? What do you use for software, is it Ableton? Cause that's what I use. If you have Ableton, you could send me the project to my email. Let me know! :D

That's not at all what I said. When I said Martin Garrix, I meant his choice of the darker chorus synth he uses before the beat drops. You know, the one with the complicated melody? You should use a synth like that. Also, like I said, look at Calvin Harris' Summer jam! If you want your song to scream "summer", you should seriously get some help by studying that song. I'm not kidding, this song is just not complete.
I hope I was of a little more help to you, and that I could make myself more clear this time around. ;)
-CG5

Actually I see youve done the breakdown with new synths, but your breakdown melody is very off for me. And the really bright sounding bells make this song sound like the background music for advertisements. I don't know, this song for me needs a lot of tweaking.
5/10
-CG5

The drum kicks sound off at the end of four measures. I hope you noticed that. Put some reverb on some of the synths, and don't use that arpeggiator synth all the time. It's used too much. You should have the beat stop out of nowhere and break back down again with a whole new selection of awesome synths. I think you also need a longer and more entertaining intro. The beat is also too quiet.
Tweak all of this, and you'll have a complete great track.
-CG5

This would go very well with the opening of a movie. Nice track.

Alright, I'm gonna give you a lot of advice, so stick around.
You should get a really nice juicy hardstyle bass to drop with the song, as well as some sidechain with the chorus synth at the drop. The beginning is bright too. There's not enough reverb on a lot of your chosen synths, and there should be some more echo going on, plus the synths should be darker. I know you said you were trying to make it a happy song, but when a song is too bright, it can cheer you up, but it won't be super incredible. I really think the idea is here, but it needs more variation, plus more complicated-sounding synths. Look at Martin Garrix's Animals, and Calvin Harris' Summer, and create a blend of the two to finish this song, and make it into a really epic and fully complete song.
-CG5

Pretty good. it's very original sounding I can definitely tell you that. It's not like any other trap, that's for sure.
I think some synths in here sound a bit too bright for me, like the first breakdown, I think there could be a nice echo-y synth playing over everything. That could definitely complete a really awesome drop! Overall, I give this a 6/10, unless you can make a real awesome drop, than it's 8/10!

Nothing bad to say about this handy-dandy piece of work except that at the drop, you should turn the volume up on the main drop synth, and turn the distortion fx down. That's all. If you don't wanna make any changes that's fine, because this is pretty sick.

-CG5

Great bass and plucks. Love the arrangement. Keep up the good work!

This is awesome. At times, I do enjoy some techno, and this is something to enjoy. Congrats.

Amazing bass! How did you get that much bass on your track? A lot of compression I presume. :D

DAAAAAAAAAAAAANG!!!!!!! THIS IS BEEEEEEEEEEEAST!!!!!

Weird. Thats all I can say. But if I were to play an 8-bit videogame, I would have this playing in my ears, so pretty good.

Pretty beast.

This is actually super awesome. Nothing bad to say about this. It all fits! Well done.

This is actually pretty funny. I was actually waiting for the word the whole time, but it didn't say it. But hey, that's just fine with me, I don't even use or like bad words. HAHA. Great song man.

The square synth should change rhythm somewhere in the song. It's very repetitive. Decrease the reverb on the "hoo," or put the reverb more to the back.

Where's the bass?

Btw, it's a good track.

Love this vibe. hip hop isn't my genre, but you hit it right on the money either way.

This rocks out!

Cool track. You be bringing back the funk up in here. ;)

Great job, UltraCryptik! You have won the Remix Competition! I will be giving you credit on my next album, which I am still working on. I was hoping if you'd like to clean it up a little bit more, so that it can be a perfect addition to the album. Just a few fixes here and there, and maybe add more wobbles. I don't know; do what you think is best. Maybe less compression/sidechain on the vocals, because there is a bit too much. Terrific job!

This is too awesome. Good job!

Last time I checked this song didn't have adult content.