wow you're a student and very little - young i mean -
but absolutely a nice brunette and a great tallent who can compose this .
i'll pursue your works .
love.
oh something influenced by night wish Band!
you're absolutely a fan of their singer .
but instrumentally this was very long , rough .
music sounded like an undone and weak cover of night wish tunes .
but you have a good voice , if you find yourown style .
I'm not a fan of Night Wish band - I don't even know that group. This track is for the cooperation work - it is raw - I played it on the yamaha synth just as a project for the further work.. Maybe a soundtrack.
Thank you for the comment.
it touches me deep inside .
Quiero saber si puedes componer algo para mi nueva canción ?
usted es un raro phennomenon .una persona inolvidable !
amor y respecto .
:)
you don't sing bad , but this was a very
easy track for singing .
and you're by far in a distance with solfeggio
breathing rules for a serious singer !
but all these things apart your guirar playing is the
biggest problem !
this simple rhytmry is clearly amateurish and you seem
don't know you can change this simple 3.4 rhythm sometimes !
for me instrumentally this is very amateurish and undone
as an instrumental track , this was an meaning guitar
training -without vox i mean-.
and this simple fact changes all you've done to
an amateur work for my ear .
but your larynx has potential .
and if you learn how to breath you can be a singer in
premier league of music .
i'm an old fan of heavy metal ,but i don't underestand
what are those keyboard sound doing in the begining !
and then when your guitar begins i think mix and master has
some problem !
but your guitar playing is very emotional and aggressive .
really fine !
definitely you're american and that's your guitar .
it has a little bit of death metal vibe too.
just mix is really wrong I think !
this seriously needs a mix .
maybe you can find a singer for this if you do a
better mix.
1.With all due respect, “old heavy metal.” That’s why you don’t “understand” the keyboards. Look at bands such as Asking alexandria, attack attack, we came as romans, and many many many more modern metalcore bands. That’s what they do. I follow my inspirations in their footsteps, if that’s a problem, tough luck. I’m not on here to make an impression.
2. OF course. Right, my mixes are always wrong. First off, I’m a teenager. I’m not an audio technician or record producer OF any type. I don’t know what you’re hearing, but this mix sounds fine through everything I’ve played them through. My friends and family also think the same, So it must be your speakers or something. No rudeness intended.
Anyways, Thanks for the feedback, thanks for listening, and thanks for commenting!
:)
so you have had these days..?
i'm really curious to know then what happened ?
lol!
thank you much much Candelaria .
yes i will live my free life.
:)
It must be on your end, Candelaria. Seems to work fine for me and the others who have played it. No one has mentioned a problem before. Maybe try another browser.
this is a good job you have done .
cool stuff but rough .
i am not going to sing it but as the case it is
a catchy idea for vocal.
i am tortured with that loud drum beat .
oh..
it is alittle raw .
trapising to be a cinematic but there's no cinematic plot .
a good theme song changes to a dull and boring one when it repeats alllong of track .
but my potentio meter shows a very good number.
just keep it up .
look guys it's really good .
I just don't like those drum rock passages in begining of a samba track .
our vocal is trying to sing in samba beat and Samba style but he is not a fan of samba .
bet he has never danced a Samba rhythm.
and a female back vocal chorus could creat a real samba.
Samba should took me dance .
but you are very tallented.
To each his own, Candelaria. None of us are Latin, so maybe our authenticity is lacking. Actually, we weren't trying to make an authentic samba, but more of a Latin fusion track. Unfortunately, they don't have 'Latin Fusion' as a genre selection! I'm not an expert on Latin style drumming, so I use many elements in my playing, just as Robert may not be an expert in Latin vocals, but he sings what he feels. If you would like to try your hand at an authentic Latin style, we will be happy to do our best at backing you.
Candelaria , for sure would be a pleasure to collab with U .
& many thnx for suggestion. I have composed few latin trials
& U can select anyone if U like to sing , U can find some of them in http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?s but don't write there for me & if U want anyone write here for me ,buT I won't compose a new track & I won't play anything else . Candelaria I know U didn't know this buT some friends of mine knew that I've decided to leave music,playing & composing & any other musical activities & I just should wait for 2014 to upload one track for some reasons & since 29jan2014 I won't be with U in looperman too .I know U may wonder buT it is 9 months that I've got my decision but there's no reason for neither of us to describe our decisions in looperman if I am sayng this right now to U ....so I have a better suggestion to U ,there are many great musicians here if U are looking for a good composer , if U want someone who can plaY spanish guitar ,then U should be honoured for having suggestion from ''FerryTerrY'' or the same Franco , who is really as a master to me . also vice verse to your analysis about drum playing of Scott , I beT U can never find such a crazy skillfull drummer that can underestand many genres & if U had played drum U knew each passage of Scott needs to many days & special trainings.
also cause once U had written U want to buy ''Misanthropy cycles''that cinematic trial of mine with Electric guitar , I suggest U please ''Tumbleweed'' & for sure he will do it better than what U may guess . U're so lucky singer that I see Ed Cunningham & Franco both have request her for collab & honesty I don't know why U've asked me for collab when they have asked U for collab . except Ed & Franco , I suggest U '' Shortbussmusic '' if he may accepT . also in recently time a new tallented Iranian here I've found who
is a very good man & his id is '' Amixxx'' & he's so tallented & I suggest U take a listen to his musiX & U'll find him so good for collab .hope these many suggestion can help & in the end again excuse me for not having this chance to work with such a tallented singer like U . hope U underestand me & enjoy collaborating feat these great musicians . I'm sure soon We'll hear from U more .appology & thnX,best wishes.____Behnam
!! decibel i don't know about your description but what i heared is my morning alarm right now! :)
thank you very much.
you are an stupendous player!
i have never known any player fast like this!
phenomenal playing..
this track surprised me ..
no word to say..just transfixion..!!!
Candelaria first sorry for latencY in replY , as U may know I've been absenT for about 50 days . ...well in fact instead of U ( in commenT ) this is me should write thank U very much to U Candelaria for your attention & kind words U have always written for me in comments , it's great to see U've liked iT & so nice for me to think anyone of my muscial trials is morning alarm for another musician like U .
I appreciate all your kind words & unaffected reaction & wish U all the bests .____Behnam
OMG te quiero decibel.
i downloaded it!
promise you'll never repent for let me have this
Daría mi vida por esto!oh indeed.
thank you very much
many huges
on House of Trap by ccbeats25
but absolutely a nice brunette and a great tallent who can compose this .
i'll pursue your works .
love.
on Possible Movie Advertisement by Keen5003
is it your voice i heared in this piece ?
Thanks!
on Black raven by Ratsouk
you're absolutely a fan of their singer .
but instrumentally this was very long , rough .
music sounded like an undone and weak cover of night wish tunes .
but you have a good voice , if you find yourown style .
Thank you for the comment.
on The Second Awakening by Orlando51
With much appreciation______Orlando
on Mojave Sunrise by Orlando51
love and regards .
With appreciation_____Orlando
on Noi doi - Behnam Zandi featuring Corina Ruxandra by deciBel
puedo escuchar esto toda la noche .
respecto y amor .
on Being from a VacUUmeD similar to my being Behnam by deciBel
Quiero saber si puedes componer algo para mi nueva canción ?
usted es un raro phennomenon .una persona inolvidable !
amor y respecto .
:)
on Waiting by Jeffierenee
on you would not believe me by Tonality
easy track for singing .
and you're by far in a distance with solfeggio
breathing rules for a serious singer !
but all these things apart your guirar playing is the
biggest problem !
this simple rhytmry is clearly amateurish and you seem
don't know you can change this simple 3.4 rhythm sometimes !
for me instrumentally this is very amateurish and undone
as an instrumental track , this was an meaning guitar
training -without vox i mean-.
and this simple fact changes all you've done to
an amateur work for my ear .
but your larynx has potential .
and if you learn how to breath you can be a singer in
premier league of music .
good luck.
on Trust by EdwardTaylor
it has a little bit of linkin Park flavour too ,
but idea is superb !
just there is 2 negative point or lack in this one too.
1_again mix is very bad !
2_heavy metal and rock , without lead guitar means
a salad without sauce for me !
this lack of lead determins grades of Rock and heay
metal in professional world .
you seem tallented .
i'll looking forward to hear more from you .
good luck.
on 241543903 and Dark Messenger by EdwardTaylor
what are those keyboard sound doing in the begining !
and then when your guitar begins i think mix and master has
some problem !
but your guitar playing is very emotional and aggressive .
really fine !
definitely you're american and that's your guitar .
it has a little bit of death metal vibe too.
just mix is really wrong I think !
this seriously needs a mix .
maybe you can find a singer for this if you do a
better mix.
2. OF course. Right, my mixes are always wrong. First off, I’m a teenager. I’m not an audio technician or record producer OF any type. I don’t know what you’re hearing, but this mix sounds fine through everything I’ve played them through. My friends and family also think the same, So it must be your speakers or something. No rudeness intended.
Anyways, Thanks for the feedback, thanks for listening, and thanks for commenting!
on Firefly ft Mariah Dawn by TameChild5000
but my mind dissconnects when singer comes in !
no relevancy between instrumental and vocal!
ofcourse this is my idea .
on lets forget about my inconvincible father by ElenaSatine
cool title !
wink .
i've had that time..like you now .
fathers will never convince if you wait for them
to allow !
live your free life girl !
:)
so you have had these days..?
i'm really curious to know then what happened ?
lol!
thank you much much Candelaria .
yes i will live my free life.
:)
on UPDATE Feeling Good Nina Simone Remix by SeriouslyJoking
maybe we can work together in future if you be minded too .
Candelaria
I really don't have a good voice so I'm stuck with only composing.
Let's get back to this later!
Take care / SJ =)
on UPDATE Feeling Good Nina Simone Remix by SeriouslyJoking
and what a wonderfull offers you've recceived
for guitar collab about this !!
i really wonder how!
good luck.
About Behnams earlier collab offer (don't know if it still stands now when the track is longer though) - I'm as surprised as you!!
on Been Missing You - Featuring Patricia Edwards by ScottFranco
I play track but nothing happens!
something wrong here!
Scott
on Good Bye by DjRymZ
on A Long Walk Home by EveryWakingMoment09
cool stuff but rough .
i am not going to sing it but as the case it is
a catchy idea for vocal.
i am tortured with that loud drum beat .
oh..
on Spirits Of The Past by PRINCELECTRO
trapising to be a cinematic but there's no cinematic plot .
a good theme song changes to a dull and boring one when it repeats alllong of track .
but my potentio meter shows a very good number.
just keep it up .
on Consequence - James Bond by midiman007
but it was superb .
10 from 10 .
on Toto - White Sister Remake by midiman007
but you are a tallented player.
on Dreaming in Rio by ScottFranco
I just don't like those drum rock passages in begining of a samba track .
our vocal is trying to sing in samba beat and Samba style but he is not a fan of samba .
bet he has never danced a Samba rhythm.
and a female back vocal chorus could creat a real samba.
Samba should took me dance .
but you are very tallented.
Cheers,
Scott
on 100 Seconds spanish guitar dueT of Me ft Mysef by deciBel
& many thnx for suggestion. I have composed few latin trials
& U can select anyone if U like to sing , U can find some of them in http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?s but don't write there for me & if U want anyone write here for me ,buT I won't compose a new track & I won't play anything else . Candelaria I know U didn't know this buT some friends of mine knew that I've decided to leave music,playing & composing & any other musical activities & I just should wait for 2014 to upload one track for some reasons & since 29jan2014 I won't be with U in looperman too .I know U may wonder buT it is 9 months that I've got my decision but there's no reason for neither of us to describe our decisions in looperman if I am sayng this right now to U ....so I have a better suggestion to U ,there are many great musicians here if U are looking for a good composer , if U want someone who can plaY spanish guitar ,then U should be honoured for having suggestion from ''FerryTerrY'' or the same Franco , who is really as a master to me . also vice verse to your analysis about drum playing of Scott , I beT U can never find such a crazy skillfull drummer that can underestand many genres & if U had played drum U knew each passage of Scott needs to many days & special trainings.
also cause once U had written U want to buy ''Misanthropy cycles''that cinematic trial of mine with Electric guitar , I suggest U please ''Tumbleweed'' & for sure he will do it better than what U may guess . U're so lucky singer that I see Ed Cunningham & Franco both have request her for collab & honesty I don't know why U've asked me for collab when they have asked U for collab . except Ed & Franco , I suggest U '' Shortbussmusic '' if he may accepT . also in recently time a new tallented Iranian here I've found who
is a very good man & his id is '' Amixxx'' & he's so tallented & I suggest U take a listen to his musiX & U'll find him so good for collab .hope these many suggestion can help & in the end again excuse me for not having this chance to work with such a tallented singer like U . hope U underestand me & enjoy collaborating feat these great musicians . I'm sure soon We'll hear from U more .appology & thnX,best wishes.____Behnam
on 100 Seconds spanish guitar dueT of Me ft Mysef by deciBel
thank you very much.
you are an stupendous player!
i have never known any player fast like this!
phenomenal playing..
this track surprised me ..
no word to say..just transfixion..!!!
I appreciate all your kind words & unaffected reaction & wish U all the bests .____Behnam
on Guitar and afro flute trial - crystal by deciBel
i downloaded it!
promise you'll never repent for let me have this
Daría mi vida por esto!oh indeed.
thank you very much
many huges