ZibmasterZ

FL Slayer right? its good to hear some metal influences on here.

Your beat sounds really solid after it starts up. Maybe try to add some layers of synth, add bass, pads, really anything other than drums. After you do that break down the drums and build it back up. You already did one of the hardest parts so just experiment.

The mood of the song matches your description. It has a real dark feel and the vocals add to that. Vocals is something i would like to add to my music. Great song and feel.

I could hear where someone could rap over this. As far as the future of hip hop i couldnt say but this track does sound good. Get some vocals from someone.

i also never heard the original. this one is good. i thought the snare was a little to sharp/loud/distracting. maybe try a clap. its not really a big deal but might be cool to play around with. keep it up!

nice rap man. its realy smooth and pleasant to listen to.

this is a good track, it is pleasant to listen to. bassline sounds awesome.

i like this track. the guitars sound awesome

this is a very interesting take on the song. it wasnt what i would have expected which is good. good job.

sounds like the background music for a sega genesis game. check out some of my new stuff and lets try to collaborate on a song sometime soon.

nice track man. sounds really good. it would be cool if someone put some vocals over it.

this is a good track. i liked that you broke it down somewhat and built back up.

i couldnt describe it either but its good and pleasant to listen to. welcome to looperman

this was great. you shred really hard and the drums were blazing. really nice job you have alot of skill.

i dont know what you use for drums but i think of metal as huge, fast, brutal drums so maybe try to get that going. check out my track metal drum exp. for ideas maybe. great first track for metal.

good vibes come from this song. i like the track.

i think this is the more entertaining of the two you have. the guitar part really adds alot and fits in nicely. nice job.

i think this is a very good start. if you keep at it and experimenting you will for sure find a sound that you like and be able to make some great stuff. thanks also for the review.

for some reason im picturing computers marching in step. thats a good sign becuase this is a good track.

//*-- thx but it was a joke xD

nice track. the synths are great. i like the sounds and tones alot.

this is a great song. it keeps changing up it still stays true to the rest off the song. the part around 1:20 is great and the horn later on is another change up but fits perfectly. awesome song.

another nice track. it has a really peaceful sound at parts and then seamlessly flows into jubilant parts with a lot of energy. you definitely have talent.

hey man ive never heard of jumpstyle before but i like it after hearing your track. nice work and keep it up. i want to hear more.

i liked your song. i thought the beginnng was the strongest part because it just has a cool vibe with the synth moving around and then building on the percussion. nice job and check out some of my stuff.

The beginning of this song is so chill. It sounds great especially for a first song and i know how first songs go. The one thing i would say is maybe bring the vocals in earlier. You will get alot better with more experience so keep making stuff and enjoy.