Sweet tune! That kick drum sound is realllllllly nice. Very 80s synthpop style. Very nice, and your vocals are blondie-like. Congrats, Im a satisfied listener!
Nice track man. Pretty sick that you got a kid on this, still serene, they dont talk about guns as much :P My one peice of con-crit is to turn that clap down, it beasts out too much, and it could kill your ears off sooner or later :P Tight choon tho, keep it up.
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You should send this out in a demo man.
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However, you need to learn to use compression on your vocals better, and the delay is offputting.
You dont vocalise enough either, just sounds like youre in your room not wanting your mom to hear or something. Be a bit more BLAH!
This is constructive crit, respect to you for writing pretty tight, but Im a picky fucker when it comes to production :P