hobewan
hobewan
slc, United States
Joined : 9th Dec 2013 - 11 years ago
Last Online : 1st Apr 2025 - 10 hours ago
hobewan comments on tracks
hobewan has posted 65 comments on other peoples tracks.
hobewan has posted 65 comments on other peoples tracks.
on Equinox - Wish I Was Dead - Prod B-W1ND by 0Equinox0
also i hope whatever is going on in your life gets better
on Metamorphosis by KnightHeir
on Wolves Ft Black Octopus Prod By Legendary by IAmLegendary
on Another Night Remix ft Ameno by JoeyBonezSD1
on InDaCoupe teaser by KnightHeir
on Explain by Pipello
on Yasuo -VIP by LunnchBoxx
on DRAGON by FRITZOMATIC
on Its Dark by DsideK
one thing i will say though is that i think you should work on getting the drums to hit harder. definitely has potential, good stuff
on Mulans Mami by FKDOLLA
heavy af man smoking a blunt to this one
on Poker Life Joker Wife by BLEEP
on XXXTentacion X Lil Skies Type Beat - Skirr by SliMusic
on Virtual Riot - Remedy -LunnchBoxx Remix by LunnchBoxx
A few suggestions I have would be: try and give it some more sub bass. It is very treble-ly and it almost seems like there way too much stereo widening going on. Generally you do want a little bit of stereo image for a wider sound, but it is extremely wide and there is nothing down the center, which adding a sub bass would help with. Another thing to note is that the intro seems to have some instruments which don't sound like they're in the right key
overall nice song :) i might have to give this vocal a go
on Veiled Ft Searz by lakeway915
on De Cor by EXANofficial
on Save Me - CAP - prod by Psycho Beatz by tsochai
-CAP
on Grand Theft Auto by KnightHeir
Im calling it a thermo-meter from now on that's genius
on White Futures by HertzFidelity
One suggestion: the pad you use during the verses needs the low end eq'ed out for sure. You already have the sub bass going so you don't want any more of those frequencies adding to it. I think if you do this then it should sit better in the mix and it will cause the wave form to be more even
I ran a risk incorporating such a complex pattern as I realise most music these days stick to simple patterns that appeal to the majority of listeners. But I felt a more complex waveform expressed the concept better and I simply like it that way.
Nevertheless I appreciate the comment as criticisms like these allowed me to better remaster many of my older tracks.
on K19 x Taxin Jackson x Tryna Get it remix by fibonacci1185
I think all you need to do with the mix is turn down the vocals a tiny bit to match the volume of the beat and then crank that master up to the point just before it starts to clip
on We are one by MPOProduction
on No One Likes Riddim by 1234zacattack
on dirty-fingerplay by centralsdev
on Over and Over ft Lullaby by Th3Coalition
on 1 Hitta Quitta by SouljahSlim3000
This is fire, great beat and vocal choice
on Slow It Up -lyrics -would love feedback by mariano3233