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roll them blunts tiighhtt

This is fire, great beat and vocal choice

Ah shit your right, I think i meant Yung Gravy

Very nice. Definitely could see J Cole rap over this or something

This is pretty good, you got the same flow as Ugly God

I'd say try to learn about vocal processing, even just the basics, because the song will sound way better if the vocals have a little reverb, etc.

This will be fire when its finished, i like that melody a lot

This is like wonky future trap. I feel like somebody could even rap over this

I kinda like it haha its not bad at all you got some cool noises in this

Copy what you have and paste it again at the end, maybe see if there are any ways to change up the melody slightly. Try and find the right vocals to put over this. I'm picturing like a female humming or someone whistling

Then you got yourself some afternoon molly

I feel you. Don't do it because I suggested it, keep it like it is if thats what you were going for.

It just feels like there's a mid/low range thats missing which the sub should be occupying so its a little weird to me, but do you brotha.

Dope beat, definitely dig it.

a couple pieces of feedback:

I'm not sure if this is the word i'm looking for but the drums seem overcompressed as hell. Either that or it sounds like the frequency of the bass is interfering with itself. This is hard to explain so see this link if you don't know what i'm talking about and are interested: https://courses.lumenlearning.com/boundless-physics/chapter/interactions-with-sound-waves/

The melody sounds good but does seem to get a little repetitive so maybe add some variation throughout in different ways

clean

this gave me a heavy mac demarco vibe. love it.

Vocals instruments mastering and composition are all on point

you deserve to get paid for this. way too good to only be released on looperman

purely organic. I don't usually listen to this type of music but I respect the talent. The entire song is perfect

Damn you have a good voice. If you are down, I would love to make a EDM/Trap remix if you sent me the vocals for this

fire. Definitely could hear this being played at a concert

I really like the intro/build ups on this. Although the drop isn't really my style, i still think it is composed well and after listening a couple times it grew on me. Definitely some super grimey halloween vibes

Not bad for a first attempt. Some suggestions I have would be:

put a compressor on your kicks and snares to give them more of a pop
Try and add some other instruments/melodies throughout
Maybe make the piano an octave higher for a few bars?