bro i'll be watching out for it, i will repeat nothing wrong with loopers we are all part of the musical family :)) but you sing too bro you have an identity, your own, push that fact because your good, keep chopping and bringing us your creativity
BCV great comment, i got nothing against loop jockeys really bro, i started as one even though i play drums and keys, and i like Slimm we have good contact when he's around im listening to yours as i write :))
This slams, I think it would sounds great in a car. I think it is ready for a vocal too.
Do you plan to add vocals later or try to sell the track to a rapper?
One of the main reasons I put some of my stuff out there in a place that anyone can access is my pursuit of vocalists. I want to find some Vocalists that might want to turn a Collab into a duo, or something along those lines. It's been very hard for me to find for some reason. I appreciate the praise man. And anything I post here, unless noted, is open for Vocals.
This is great
"You need more nourishment, my rhymes serve punishment"
"I'm Penning fresh lines with my papermate"
legendary lines there
I'm a bic round stic med man... I already have to buy them from latin market. Last time I bought two boxes. I will probably stop writing songs if they discontinue that pen :)
thanks bro, i buy pens in bulk too, i would have a panic attack if i never had one, and they have to be black ink, fucking mad mental health, is it just me? who the fuck writes in blue.
ive just wrote another bar fest been practising it to a Dre type beat like a slim delivery but im putting something together that i play pianos strings and drums so im still undecided at the min, keep ckecking bro
This has character and floats super nice as indie dream pop. I really like your voice. I think I said this before, but you have a very genuine vocal delivery that is easy to connect with.
Dimestop gets better every time I pop on LM for a listen. Your flow is so unique and easy on the ears and your lyrics go deep without being forced.
Refined :)
cheers Slimm, i appreciate you reviewing my tracks, ive had some good work recently and got some good bars to come too, i seen you got fresh up i was hoping you would soon as i seen your mail i checked first :)) i'll be on it in a bit, thanks for the visit bro
cheers for the kind words Slimm, as you know i always try put a lot into the lyric and try to keep it witty, im working on a few tracks at the same time so hopefully keep the lines fresh and keep having fun, just listened to Mr Biggles again time to level up, i got that nip :))
This is really good atmospheric DnB. You can sell this in a library for video I think. It's says a lot and has strong imagery, but is not too busy and not cluttered or distracting. Good composition :)
Groovy guitar. i know you listen to Wes ;)
I would put some treatments on drums to make them a little more humanized, because the whole track has a lot of vibe and the drums struggle to keep up as a simple loop. The loop works, but I think it can provide more support for the arrangement and set it all off with some tlc.
Really great playing. Very enjoyable!
Thank you, V, for the listen and comment. I appreciate your opinion of this track. I need a more specific explanation of your critique. Hit me hard, I won't be mad at you. When you say you would put some treatment on drums to make more human, I'm assuming you mean additional processing. You go on to say the drums struggle to keep up as a simple loop. I actually wrote the drum pattern, So I guess you could call it my loop, and by the drums being the pulse of any track, make me understand what you mean when you say they struggle to keep up as a simple loop. Again I appreciate your opinion, so that I can understand how to fix what you are hearing on this one. PEACE. T576 OUT.
I like this. the progressions are super delux.
I think you should hire a live bassist. the bassline is good, but it is a little stiff and artificial when soloed. A pocket player would tear it up and really push the song imo.
The motifs are really strong, esp on horn and guitar. Nice work here :)
Hey VirginiaSlimm. Thank you for stopping by. Your comment's and perspective with the fave is greatly appreciated. I would love to plug a live bassist in to give a more organic feel to the groove. I feel you on "tear it up"! But for the time being, I will work on those stiff sections. Have a great weekend. Peace.
Very cool. I like this genre for your voice.
vocals could be weightier in the mix imo. I hear your voice when but have trouble hearing what you are saying. You put work into your lyrics so i think it's important to hear what you are saying. :)
thanks for the stop off and feedback Slimm, i think your right on the vocal, the backing was a little low in places, i have brought it up slightly. its my north-east UK twang (accent) even the English struggle understanding it :)) we talk fast, thanks for checking me out again bro, really appreciate it
ai is getting closer and closer.It's still doesn't emote for me but the track and the arrangement are nice. I wonder how good the ai audio will be in 6 months. We are now using ai to create and talk to ai's. They are probably sampling us from their inside world and wondering if we sound like real robots :D
I believe that we have reached a point where it will become increasingly difficult to know what is natural and what is artificial. In the coming months and years, we will certainly be more and more surprised.
I'm listening, trying to decide if you have what it takes to be "the one" producer! ;)
Hehe.
Solid track and good mixing. You will have success with a vocalist for your materials I imagine!
I like this. Don't usually hear this kind of guitar tone on this kind of beat. It works and it's refreshing. can be used for a ballad for a heavier artist i think. :)
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Trying to get good at using my mpc so I'm loop chopping today
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-What is the translation of the hook into English?
I would like the stems if you have them posted up
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Guilty as charged :D
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Do you plan to add vocals later or try to sell the track to a rapper?
on Frightening Men by dimestop
"You need more nourishment, my rhymes serve punishment"
"I'm Penning fresh lines with my papermate"
legendary lines there
I'm a bic round stic med man... I already have to buy them from latin market. Last time I bought two boxes. I will probably stop writing songs if they discontinue that pen :)
ive just wrote another bar fest been practising it to a Dre type beat like a slim delivery but im putting something together that i play pianos strings and drums so im still undecided at the min, keep ckecking bro
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Refined :)
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I would put some treatments on drums to make them a little more humanized, because the whole track has a lot of vibe and the drums struggle to keep up as a simple loop. The loop works, but I think it can provide more support for the arrangement and set it all off with some tlc.
Really great playing. Very enjoyable!
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I think you should hire a live bassist. the bassline is good, but it is a little stiff and artificial when soloed. A pocket player would tear it up and really push the song imo.
The motifs are really strong, esp on horn and guitar. Nice work here :)
Mark
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Thanks for sharing!
i made a new recording, hopefully a slight improvement :)
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vocals could be weightier in the mix imo. I hear your voice when but have trouble hearing what you are saying. You put work into your lyrics so i think it's important to hear what you are saying. :)
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Julio
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How is this song NOT called "Beat 'em down"?!?!
:D...
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Hehe.
Solid track and good mixing. You will have success with a vocalist for your materials I imagine!
Thanks for the compliment!
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Really great energy and authentic playing. i think you should shop it for a vocalist and distribute it maybe.
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