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I like these lyrics. I don't need an education in hip hop, but I respect your random blanket insult to all readers and listeners. Got a Fat Joe flow starting at around 2:00. I like it.

Really good rapping. Nice style and good production.

Super sax doubling technique. Really smooth and textured. Well done!

Fing retail. Modern slavery. Stay strong...
Your vocs are getting better each time. Good energy in the performance and the track is hot.
Nice.

Really nice production, lots of potential :)

Really easy on the ears. :D

I dig the 8bit distortion on the 808. Makes a nice whine in the background. Good wonk beat. sounds good backwards after break.

Reminds me of Chemical Bros. If brickwalling is an issue(sounds like it might be), you can test by turning up the volume on your monitoring system. If it gets more fatiguing at higher or moderate volumes it might be too slammed. If clarity drops off at higher volumes it might be over-crushed. You can always sidechain to regain clarity if you want a slammed sound but lack some articulation or dynamics across volumes(NY bus compression)
Good cinematic feel to the production and arrangements. Lots of good things here.

Teasers don't work on us. There is no e-store here. :P
I can't wait to hear the full mix. I like the diverse sounds you've used. I swear I heard an Elephant in the room. :)

Don't boost, cut. the mixing bus is a fixed size, and you have to fit everything in, boosting makes less space... Almost all good eq'ing is cutting. Make puzzle pieces.
If you want to know what to boost and cut, I recommend using a reference track(or two) and loading it into your project so you can A/B between their mix and yours and find a good balance for your sources.
It's a respectable mix though, nice job!

Addendum, for some reason my dog goes ape-shit when she hears your vocal chops... Always fun to watch a little dog march around looking for monsters :D

Sounds good. I think you should credit the vocalist. I like the repetitive loops, a strong lead vocal would make the repetition a non-issue imo.

That's fantastic guitar playing and guitar production. Really correct and epic. There's plenty of room for a singer too. well done.

If I were in your shoes I would finish my own simple instrumental to go under the vocal(drums and keys), register that track, then release the vocal stem for remix.
It's a great rap, you'll get a ton remixes if you post the vocal.
:D

very well done. If it's about mastering you can post stems. For a non profit/benefit track you are more likely to get a stem remaster from a remote producer/engineer. It's a quick job from stems.
Really well written song, the mix and production is fine imo :)

REALLY GREAT RHYTHM HERE MAN. LIKE YOUR MIX TOO!

I like this bass a lot. Solid track. I can see you give a hoot as well. Thank you for caring. :)

Sweet sweet revenge...

Its a really good song. It needs a master bus compression/eq section rework to get the volume up and make the speakers work the material to full effect. It's worth doing when the song is well written like this is. :)

I love that you intro with swamp noises. hehehe. You can take the swamp out of the bayou, but you can't take the bayou out of the swamp. Mix is much cleaner. This version shows real skill acquisition over the original version. Nice work!

Vocal stack is really rich. I think you're a pretty good wrestler. Keep trying new things, this is working :)

I really like your vocal edits and automation. :)

Really nice work. Good vocal production :)

Cool arrangement and really killer bass. :)

This is excellent. Very original.