Yeah, I like these lyrics a lot. I would like to hear a vocal backing track on the hook to brace it a little. A slightly less hot sound on the main vocals too bc it distorts in some places.
This is a really good song and a tight rap.
Thanks what's a vocal backing track? A dub? I THINK I KNOW what you talking about with the distortion I peeped that 2 so I'm a watch out for that in doing my next song
Hey thanks, glad you liked the piano!
I've made a new version which is sounding quite different and hopefully better - it's here if you want to take a listen: http://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/171543
Way better than baking biscuits. Please don't feed the zombies! ;)
Good delivery, hard, street. I agree with centralsdev about the fit, but maybe just some sub bass or 808 booms and eq of high mids in the backing track would set it off.
-Slimm
Track sounds good. It's hard for me to assess it for production because it uses elements of the original track that it covers. (Sia's voice as a base)
Hope to hear your final mix soon, keep it up.
-Slimm
Most new rappers can't change a record without scratching it and bending the needle. :D This flow is pretty sick, very nice lead vocals and hype vocals. Very nice track and edits. Legit!
Hey thanks friend for taking a listen! I'm not sure if I'll be doing a new mix of this or not. I've been kind of focused on inducing a spontaneous vibe into my songs, and remixing can destroy that vibe, so it's a tough call. I appreciate the comment!
Very good song here. Synths are too loudly mixed for the track imo they push out the vocals and the drums. The performances are great and the arrangement is solid! Agree that this is a good collab combination, would like to hear an album of this band/duo.
-Slimm
Superb. Only comment from me is in mixing, in some parts the cymbals and snare bottom sound a little too front and center and dominate a little too much for my taste. The instrumental and the vocal really compliment each other well. Strong rhythmic arrangements.
-Slimm
I appreciate your honest feedback! Thanks for the complements. As far as the mix goes I'm pretty much still learning as I go & this type of feedback allows me to go back an pay attention to the specific areas that you mention. I appreciate you for that as well!
Good sounding track. Expected a house style 4 on the floor drop at 1:20 after swoop/build. would really like to hear it with that in a club setting. Enjoying the shuffling in the drum programming and the smooth arps. Vocals sound great. Very well used synth sounds.
-Slimm
You know, I was about to add a solid house drum 4/4 precisely where you wanted to hear it but forgot all about it somewhere a long the way!
I also think it would be a good match there.
Will have to try that.
They all sound good, so which is best depends on where it's used imo. My favorite part is the final beat bc of the triangles. They ring out nicely without overpowering the beat.
-Slimm
Triplet halftime synths at 1:10 are killer, the detuning sounds great and adds character to the lead melody. Uplifting with good composition and well chosen/crafted sounds.
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The beat and production is killing. The vocals sound a little forced to me rhythm-wise in some spots. chop and nudge would pocket it nicely i think. I like this track quite a bit.
-Slimm
very cool track. The lyrics sit in a novel way. I don't speak German, but it sounds well delivered, particularly after the break around 1:20 with the low voice. Nice proper reggae. sweet production.
-Slimm
Thanks a lot for this friendly words man.
Looks like i done some that realy a lot people like.
Many told me that they realy love the second part (the refrain) cause it sounds so reggaelike....
So thanks for the time to listen and youre nice words
joe
I like the different feel of the parts. the transitions are a little abrupt, but when I listen to it as a collage of samples it's very appealing. Especially the dark sounding guitar riff with delay and the ring-mod bell sound that has stereo delay. Good work. could be tied together with a vocal or a lead instrument imo. Hi-five to all old bass players.
-Slimm
Reminds me of some DMX style track. Gets really sharp around 1:00 mark. Well done. Bass drum is a little boxy(too hot in low-mid) on my monitors. Very well put togethen man!
-Slimm
The marimba sound with the delay is dope as hell. It's ripe for a deep swanky bassline imo, but the tuning in the vocal sample would make that tricky. I'll gladly make you a live played bassline for it if you can post or email a stripped down version without the vocal. I dig it. bangs.
-Slimm
believe! They can always rap in half-time too. A good rapper can work with almost any rhythm. I bet you can find an acapella here and chop it up with no problem. Good luck!
-Slimm
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This is a really good song and a tight rap.
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:D
I've made a new version which is sounding quite different and hopefully better - it's here if you want to take a listen:
http://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/171543
Thanks again for the great vocal.
Cheers/ SJ =)
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Good delivery, hard, street. I agree with centralsdev about the fit, but maybe just some sub bass or 808 booms and eq of high mids in the backing track would set it off.
-Slimm
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Hope to hear your final mix soon, keep it up.
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Thanks for your comment.
I'd never heard of 'icecream progressions' but I googled it and I believe this track would fall in that category. Thanks for teaching me something.
Cheers,
Scott
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I also think it would be a good match there.
Will have to try that.
Thanks for the feedback!
/SJ
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Looks like i done some that realy a lot people like.
Many told me that they realy love the second part (the refrain) cause it sounds so reggaelike....
So thanks for the time to listen and youre nice words
joe
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I have been absent .
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