Well, here's my review, I think you waited too much in the intro (first 2 mins). Try to make it shorter or add more elements. The bubble like sounds are hot:) After the 2 mins, I think I could appreciate the idea of you want to do (the bass/melody) but I didn't feel enough energy from it, I think it needs some kind of boost like some fx or distortion. I think you should focus on "enhancing" the bass/melody to make it more powerful. Also you could try adding sweeps to make transitions more interesting, like for example around 2:17 :)
-Ryck
Thanx for the review! You've got right! It's not ready yet. But I wanted to show the main destination of the music to my friend. I've got problem with my laptop rams so I can't record the fx and effects with my midib. But my friend can download and calibrate the song. I need to wait my new rams:( :)
That bassline since the beginning...oohh yeaahhhh ;)
The only thing I could suggest you is to make it a little longer like one or two minutes more. Everything else is good.
-Ryck
Nice arrangement, good structure. What I would do is to filter a little more the lead synth (I feel it simple for some reason) and try to make it more interesting more provocative like adding more "color" to it. That's my honest opinion :)
-Ryck
I heard your trak a couple of times. Very good arrangements, keep up the good work. You got a very good sound. My advice, keep revising and refining it. Listen it more and more and look ways to enhance it. :)
-Ryck
I think is pretty good. What I would do is to look for a way to enhance the kick, maybe compressing it or doing some eq adjustment to it. Also you might also try to add a Hihat or a snare to the main beat. The rest of the fx is very very good. And about the voice, if you have a lyric in mind and find somebody to sing it, IT SHOULD BE AWESOME :) Well that's my opinion:)
thanks a lot for your advices, I will try to add hit hat or snare. I don't know how to compress the kick, so I'll try to equalize...
I's very nice of you to take time to give advices to newbees ;-)
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