Hey man, I have tried rapping myself a few times and I get the feeling you are struggling with the same things as I am.
- I don't really believe that you believe in what you are delivering, that means you really gotta own it, stand behind what you are saying and making me believe that.
- Staying in tempo, this has to do with flow and counting bars, its not something many people have naturally. I would suggest just free styling to a metronome until you feel comfortable you can stay in beat.
Overall this is an attempt as you said and not something professionally finished, so keep working on it, take this feedback and keep trying soldier.
Nobody gets there without hard work and dedication.
Stay true, keep making music!
What a wonderful track, thank you for this! For some reason I get a Stan from Eminem feel when I listen to this, like if you put his vocals from that song on this it would just match so well.
A wonderful track by itself, goodjob!
Stay true, keep making music.
I love this vibe, the sound feels like it belongs in the 70's and I mean that in a very good way. I love synthwave music! goodjob!
Stay true, keep making music!
Maybe a bit empty, you could add some more elements, effects and melodies. The intro reminds me of another song, can't quite put my finger on which one tho. Keep at it!
Thanks alot for the kind comment. :) I will definetly continue making beat. I just started around 5 days ago and its just so much fun exploring the different tunes you can make in fl studios!
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- I don't really believe that you believe in what you are delivering, that means you really gotta own it, stand behind what you are saying and making me believe that.
- Staying in tempo, this has to do with flow and counting bars, its not something many people have naturally. I would suggest just free styling to a metronome until you feel comfortable you can stay in beat.
Overall this is an attempt as you said and not something professionally finished, so keep working on it, take this feedback and keep trying soldier.
Nobody gets there without hard work and dedication.
Stay true, keep making music!
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A wonderful track by itself, goodjob!
Stay true, keep making music.
With much appreciation_____Orlando
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Stay true, keep making music!
A bientot !
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