i can hear overdriven guitars and pumping bass here. loved the short transition in the middle - that makes the whole song different. and i like the words flowing - that's blues, bro!
what i love about this track is that it's sparkling with emotions and passion (with all those 8-bit 80's synths and bass sound it's not as easy as it may sound). Kind of tracks I love Looperman for - unpredictable and touchy. I especially liked the last 40 seconds - they're just perfect!
Thanks buddy. this is an old one. Unfortunately the vocal samples arent what they could be. i tried to remaster it once now i have a better sense of what i am doing, and it didnt sound good!
Thanks for the review, cos i still really like this one!
hey Matt
so cool to find that you're still here! (and you rock!)
And I'm going to be critical here. It's so unfair that the song is soooo short - it took me to the good old days, but for less than two minutes...
all you need is luck a&r from good label!
this track has absolutely great melody - tender, engaging and simple - and very good guitar and synths.
few comments if you dont' mind - I do feel that you need good bassline for this track (if the guitar work is yours - you can easily record a simple bass). and there's too much atmosphere in the drums - i would say that for this track you probably need something more flat 'joy-division'-like sound. but anyway that's only my feeling.
great switch - love how how the tune and arrangements develop, and how different parts come together smoothly.
and the way the track ends is so powerful it brings another sense
to all previous parts!
very brave stylization! behind the simplicity there's lot of thought and skill! love the synths - and vocals are perfectly matching the overall 'craziness'. somehow this track sounds genuinely British. great worj!
Thank you for the kind words! I would agree that there is some overall craziness, but that can't be avoided with me. I've been told I sound british before, but you can never hear that too often. Thanks for the listen!
i don't think you should really change anything for this track - the production, melody - all is in place really. mastering skills is something we should always progress on ))
I appreciate your comments on this piece. I think Night Train is a little short though, but at the same time, the structure of it doesn't really lend itself to being repeated too long. I ran into a similar hurdle with 'better judgment', and managed to make it longer - although it too has some areas open for improvement. I have an ear infection right now - happy times - so my hearing is abit rubbish, and I have not done any work on my music nor commented on others - including yours. Give me some time and I'll listen to more of your music - last I listened to was Sunlit blvd... (great piece.) It just wouldn't be right to comment when I can't hear much at all. lol
Thanks again!
it gives the feeling of train - that's for sure
but... it's so dark that i can see the picture of train heading straight out of this world into some darker and distant place. it made me shiver - it's in a way scary and bears some uncomfortable feeling you can't easy forget. so i suppose that's what you wanted to achieve - and you've done it! production and melodies are great apart from that!
byb, thanks for the review. Its still a work in progress, although I've shelved it for awhile so I can work on improving my mastering skills - which are pretty limited right now.
I'm not promising to implement them, but what changes would you suggest?
oh yeah - you have the groove, mate!
the track is sort of mixture of great old school blues and new-wave feeling - not an easy cocktail!
what if you simply put some effects on vocal - simple compression will add more drive.
but i can imagine that your wife (and any other women in the world) is dreaming to hear something like this! great!
great melody and great sound - it's somehow very uplifting track, though with a slightly darker side - especially the ending. i think there you could go even further! thanks for sharing!
What a great track - this acapella is not an easy one, with slightly broken jazzy swing... I like vocals of Holly very much, but I think that it's the case when the track itself is speaking on its own. There's so much style and much feeling really! I love it!
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Thanks for the review, cos i still really like this one!
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the flute is fantastic and yes it would be a perfect song for end titles of a great movie. so the genre chosen is just right
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the production is straight and clean. great stuff
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so cool to find that you're still here! (and you rock!)
And I'm going to be critical here. It's so unfair that the song is soooo short - it took me to the good old days, but for less than two minutes...
all you need is luck a&r from good label!
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very good production work - and hipnotyzing tune. great work!
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good contrast between vocal and melody - and damn good tune!
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few comments if you dont' mind - I do feel that you need good bassline for this track (if the guitar work is yours - you can easily record a simple bass). and there's too much atmosphere in the drums - i would say that for this track you probably need something more flat 'joy-division'-like sound. but anyway that's only my feeling.
enjoyed your track very much!
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and the way the track ends is so powerful it brings another sense
to all previous parts!
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love the sound!
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Thanks again!
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but... it's so dark that i can see the picture of train heading straight out of this world into some darker and distant place. it made me shiver - it's in a way scary and bears some uncomfortable feeling you can't easy forget. so i suppose that's what you wanted to achieve - and you've done it! production and melodies are great apart from that!
I'm not promising to implement them, but what changes would you suggest?
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the track is sort of mixture of great old school blues and new-wave feeling - not an easy cocktail!
what if you simply put some effects on vocal - simple compression will add more drive.
but i can imagine that your wife (and any other women in the world) is dreaming to hear something like this! great!
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i like it's so simple yet beautiful and driving. synth work is fantastic - just love it!
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as i said - this track is much better than anything I could have done with it. Thanks - keep it up!
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been jumping a bit on my chair! Peace!
I think i am still stuck in the 90's but I'm glad u enjoyed the ride!Peace>lofthouse
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