Stuki

Nice track, I enjoyed it, as the previous comment suggested about the drums. I would recommend maybe using your kick and snare to side chain compress some of your leads and bass (Ducking) to allow your drums to cut through the mix. Also EQ everything to make it clearer. Just allow the frequencies you need for every instrument/sample.

Great attempt. Keep up the good work.

I like this track a lot, you got lots of variety going on in it, nothing becomes stale and that bass line is sick dude. :D

Liking the drum work a lot, nice use of the pads. The only nitpicks I have with it are a few loose frequencies that crackle around 2min 50 secs+ and maybe a restructuring of the main saw lead that rises in pitch in the intro, seem to start halfway throught the rift, sounds a bit off. Other than that excellent job. :-)

Good track Jack, I like dark and twisted elements. I have to agree with Codex, the percussion although very good just lacks that power/punch to shine through. Overall great attempt.

Nice first try, you got the elements of what it is all about, now it's just a matter of fine tuning those elements. I agree with Numberjack about maybe phattening up the bass with some dark, grizzly stabs and maybe reign in a few of the high frequencies on the percussion. Overal good first attempt.

Btw EQ everything... slap everything, the kick, snare, hats, bass, samples... each element through it's own EQ and apply some sort of High Pass and Low Pass filter to filter out all unwanted frequencies. Just check with a frequency analyzer. It's amazing how clean it will sound even with some basic filtering. :-)

Nice track, really like it. A little more variation in the track structure and I think your onto a winner.

For an unfinished track it certainly has potential, nice layout. Loving the breakbeat section of the main build up around 1:55.

Reminds me of tracks on my favourite label, platipus records.

Excellent job.

Great accompaniment and arrangement to some wonderful vocals, fits perfectly. Job well done.

Never ever get tired of it! Liking the track a lot, has that Aphoroditey feel underlying it. The distortion and grime needs a slight tweak on the levels but not too much or you lose the essence of what the track is about. Nice job.:D

Loving the earieness factor, reminds me of the good ol's days. In particular the dropdown at 2m 58s, from there on it really takes off. Good job! :)