Hey bro! The idea, in general, is pretty dope. You need to work some more on the mixing process tho. Sidechain the kick to the 808 because there's a conflict. Or just shift the 808 by 0.2 sec later and cut a bit the kick. Try to limit the beat and cut some frequencies off. I could a mix on your project if you want to. Send me a message, I'll help you out!
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