Maybe I would just de-compress it or (de-limit) a little. The wave form seems peaked in some parts, probably would be nicer on the hears and more dynamic if you lowered it just a bit.
Nice one man, didn't expect it when I read "trap". Way different than average. Has a really nice flow and rythm.
I have some different trap tracks too, would like your opinion.
Keep them coming
Awesome song but maybe needs a vocal recording with better equipment. Maybe I'm wrong but there's a lot distortion and small vocal range, it messes with the voice and the rest of the track.
I don't normally listen to industrial like this but I like it.
Maybe I would suggest using some limiting or compression to tone down those highs a bit. Also, I would add something more bassy and flat, without a lot of trebble attack. I think the music has too much highpitced sounds all the time, could have less, be more dynamic. Just my opinion though.
Keep it up man :)
Nice chill flow man, a lot of melody in your voice. I do think it has to much fx, just my personal liking, normally prefer natural voices.
You could seriously get somewhere, seems to me your tracks would do well with the mainstream community.
Just listened to this again. Your flow is for real man, feels real natural, almost reminds of Slick Rick, the way he just seems to be talking and it's all musical and rhythm at the same time.
Will be paying attention to your releases.
The intro was a bit difficult to play as I have to move quickly between two different types of bowing. So, there's a lot of editing and layering going on in the intro (before the drums come in). Still doesn't sound quite right but it is quite interesting and distinctive.
I think you got the message from this song pretty clearly. I did not enter into this creation with any ideas or expectations, but the thought process entered into it all the same. My concerns about the future are becoming all too clear while I research government policy. The corporations who control the government have things locked down nice and tight. There is little recourse for simple individuals. Self defense is becoming terrorism. Living life is becoming impossible. The world is beginning to crack, literally. Thank you for listening and leaving your thoughts!
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If you're interested to rap for a song of mine, feel free to contact me.
yeah I really felt your beats ,i'll definitely hit you up soon homie
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I have some different trap tracks too, would like your opinion.
Keep them coming
-Sheen
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By the way, wouldn't you be interested on rapping for my song Dwarf? You even wrote a couple of lines in the comments. Think about it.
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The track got a little of 80s feel.
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Maybe I would suggest using some limiting or compression to tone down those highs a bit. Also, I would add something more bassy and flat, without a lot of trebble attack. I think the music has too much highpitced sounds all the time, could have less, be more dynamic. Just my opinion though.
Keep it up man :)
I agree, I always have too much high-end, I've been experimenting with how to bring it down, with moderate success, although this is a first draft..
My ears are in need of a Doctor.
Thanks for listening dude and even more for your suggestions, I'll be sure to keep them in mind when I come back to this :)
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You could seriously get somewhere, seems to me your tracks would do well with the mainstream community.
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The intro was a bit difficult to play as I have to move quickly between two different types of bowing. So, there's a lot of editing and layering going on in the intro (before the drums come in). Still doesn't sound quite right but it is quite interesting and distinctive.
"Beat fits perfect, chill, psychy and groovy"
Yes, I think it's all those things.
Great to hear you love it.
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Nice one, although I share different feelings when listening to this, makes me think of a dystopian future of nothing.