I'm getting back on here after a long time off. I like it. Nice bass for the background. I would say it is not RnB at all. However, it is a cool flowing track. I would classify it closer to chillout. Also, you could consider dropping the percussion out at some point in the middle and maybe even the bass, and just play one of those neat riffs for a couple measures and then bring in the bass, then high hats or all of the percussion if it's not broken down in the track. It may help to give it more mystery. But, it's cool. Good job.
Wow! 5th grader huh? Well, if that's so, then very impressive. You have some very cool and heavy sounds in this track especially at 1:25 when it breaks in to the heavy, thick and dark synth. When it breaks into that synth, then you could drop a real heavy, deep hitting kick to start off a killer dubstep beat and keep that synth going for a several measures while bringing in some dark atmospheric sounds. Be careful to watch the beats and their tempos. I would love to download some of these sounds and use them for some dark liquid dubstep that I may put together. Anyway, very very cool and keep up the good work.
Very nice. Your voice is crazy cool. The riff at about the 49 second mark is really good along with the supporting sounds - capitalize on that! To me, that first riff and the background sounds could go far - nice feel and flow to it. The track is great! Keep on and keep smiling!
This was well composed. I like the synths around the 2:07 mark those are good. Build up on those greatly along with the percussion and then drop off into calm peaceful syths....just an idea. The percussion was tight. Good work!
Powerful sounds. The beat needs to be tweaked. On something like this, I would keep the beat very simple and I would reduce the treble on the high hat and the snare. Bring in a timpany or heavy bass. But, like the sounds and the collaboration.
Uplifting. Hey, this track got me going. Some good synths. Not a lot of beat dropping but it was good and full of energy. It's motivating me to do something!
Yes, this works for a club. The begining throws you off but when the synths come in with the vocals it's heavy and moving. Like the trance synths with those vocals - tweek the begining. Otherwise, this would be ideal to play at a club with atmospheric sounds in the background - just an idea. Nice message at the end! Good stuff.
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If you put that together just after you got off work, then good job. It's very crisp and uplifting. It perks you up - good flow and nice percussion. I'm actually more into the dark mysterious type of music but this kept me going.
I like the dark/scary background and the rimshots with echoed snares. Put in some heavy bass and then drop the percussion altogether..........good stuff.
Like the dark background......I have several hundred dark and heavy beats that might compliment some of your music...I'll start uploading them. nice background
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Very nice. Your voice is crazy cool. The riff at about the 49 second mark is really good along with the supporting sounds - capitalize on that! To me, that first riff and the background sounds could go far - nice feel and flow to it. The track is great! Keep on and keep smiling!
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If you put that together just after you got off work, then good job. It's very crisp and uplifting. It perks you up - good flow and nice percussion. I'm actually more into the dark mysterious type of music but this kept me going.
Thank you!
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