you got flows but your bars kinda weak and your voice mix sounds weirdly robotic lol. some kind of flanger or smth you should get rid of it and itll sound more natural and pleasing to the human eardrum.
Thanks, Yeah don't take my bars serious this was just a fun track, I got conscious lyrical stuff lined up soon. I'm working on my mix skill so thanks for the feedback!
on CXRTER - Headshot Ft Vic Rippa by swansea