Ye nice track, its quite fat and i'd agree with ChrissG in sayin its more like grime or electro-grime, but that doesn't take away anything from the track. I'm feelin that big bass, just how I like them lol and i feel that complete pause, its quite unique in a way.
1 thing i think u should work on is ur levels and eq'ing cus some of it was fairly harsh on the ear. Also just a suggestion, u might look to bring in a subtle melody.
Listening to it again, i like the way hi-hats work with the drum beat man, nice! I can actually hear myself spittin some bars over this beat in my head lol...maybe u should try and get somebody to MC over it.
I like the way the drum beat go 'kick-kick-clap-hat-hat-clap', thought it was pretty cool, gives it like a nice garage vibe.
I like the drop after that grimey vocal sample, it reminded me of 'Datsik and Excision - Swagga' and its the best part of the song and i think u need to incorporate that part in the tune more.
I think the drums are proper cool and the track works well together, but personally i dont like the sound of the bass cus it doesnt sound fat enough to me and i think it needs some more things in it to keep the track interesting if u know what i mean.
Liking what i hear though.
I'm ratin! I like the creativeness the way it goes back and forth, remains quite interesting and then never saw that final bit coming... thats heavyweight. Just my opinion, two things I think you might wanna change... the hi-hats sound too reverbed and maybe too panned? Also, for a such a heavy track i think u need to work on that snare so its propa fat and crunchy and in ur face, then again u probs haven't had time in the 5 hours lol. Fair play so far.
WTF!? This sh*t is crazy, inspired by chase n status/501 kind of dubstep tunes im guessin lol. Seriously, this is fackin fatter than Fat Joe...
but the only constructive criticism i can give is...'Tell me that we've lost everythin...', i liked the MLK sample and the indian vocals but the other one is pretty poor tbh, i think u should take it out but thats just my opinion.
Also i think u might wanna add some fat swishes in there and reverse crashes/reverse synths, its hardly necessary but it might sound good. Lastly the only other is the sequencing of the hihats are pretty bog standard...maybe u wanted them very simple but u might wanna try playin with them and makin a more interestin hihat loop.
I can't believe I've listened to it 5 times already...i nearly got a boner when i first heard that fat bass! Sick tune, i honestly wouldn't have done such a big review if i weren't ratin it.
i have only one problem with this track.
i did it in Audacity.
i was using a demo version of FL at the time,
and i didnt save the sytrus patch for this
bassline (which bugs the hell outta me)cuz i cudnt save anything. it was a demo version lol.
but i hold a liscence for em now.
so im still trynna get this bass line
again. Deffinitly highly influenced by Chase and status.
i rlly wanna get that bassline again.
then tweak it so its thicker.
This is a sweet track, but i'm gonna have to say why the Jeremy Kyle didn't you bring that fat synth thats at the end (3:20ish), come in a lot sooner and have it coming in and out cus that sounds sick. I like the bass and the melody, and the vocals are really good, it just get a little repetitive after a while. It does sound like its inspired by Eastern Jam lol. This is a sweet track but with a few changes it could be like an amazing track!
I think you should try and change the drums, because I'm feelin the bass and the melody just not the drums. Maybe change them when the wub-wub bass comes in, may as well try it out.
I absolutely hate grime but i completely loved this track for some reason, your quite a talented producer i must say. Also, that track Sandwalker is very nice...sounds a bit like burial in the beginning, the only criticism of Sandwalker i can have is that i think later on you go a bit too over the top with your LFO's if you know what i mean, just a little constructive criticism :)
I think you might like grime if you gave it a bit of a chance. Alot of the commerical grime is terrible, i'll admit that, But theres some good underground stuff out there. I prefere just the instrumental side of it, without the MCing, as MCing is quite hard to get right and it takes talent, a talent which so many little pikeys think they have and dont, lol. :P
As for sandwalker i'll agree with you. But thats pretty much the whole track is just playing about with the LFO. It was fun. I wasnt expecting it to fill any dancefloors though :)
Thanks for the review(s)! I love a bit of constructive critisism, it helps me out alot.
on Wait What by NtaT
1 thing i think u should work on is ur levels and eq'ing cus some of it was fairly harsh on the ear. Also just a suggestion, u might look to bring in a subtle melody.
Listening to it again, i like the way hi-hats work with the drum beat man, nice! I can actually hear myself spittin some bars over this beat in my head lol...maybe u should try and get somebody to MC over it.
on EAT MY DUB- BLYNDE by reubenblynde
I like the drop after that grimey vocal sample, it reminded me of 'Datsik and Excision - Swagga' and its the best part of the song and i think u need to incorporate that part in the tune more.
I think the drums are proper cool and the track works well together, but personally i dont like the sound of the bass cus it doesnt sound fat enough to me and i think it needs some more things in it to keep the track interesting if u know what i mean.
Liking what i hear though.
on Grandiosity by simplistic6210
on Freedom Koncepts by SovereignKonceptz
but the only constructive criticism i can give is...'Tell me that we've lost everythin...', i liked the MLK sample and the indian vocals but the other one is pretty poor tbh, i think u should take it out but thats just my opinion.
Also i think u might wanna add some fat swishes in there and reverse crashes/reverse synths, its hardly necessary but it might sound good. Lastly the only other is the sequencing of the hihats are pretty bog standard...maybe u wanted them very simple but u might wanna try playin with them and makin a more interestin hihat loop.
I can't believe I've listened to it 5 times already...i nearly got a boner when i first heard that fat bass! Sick tune, i honestly wouldn't have done such a big review if i weren't ratin it.
Keep it up!
i did it in Audacity.
i was using a demo version of FL at the time,
and i didnt save the sytrus patch for this
bassline (which bugs the hell outta me)cuz i cudnt save anything. it was a demo version lol.
but i hold a liscence for em now.
so im still trynna get this bass line
again. Deffinitly highly influenced by Chase and status.
i rlly wanna get that bassline again.
then tweak it so its thicker.
on Learn to Cook by Zachmanable
on Plane Sailing by UnknownSuspect
on Grimeshot by Chud37
As for sandwalker i'll agree with you. But thats pretty much the whole track is just playing about with the LFO. It was fun. I wasnt expecting it to fill any dancefloors though :)
Thanks for the review(s)! I love a bit of constructive critisism, it helps me out alot.