This is great stuff - very glad I randomly clicked on this one. Nothing bad to say - I liked everything about this track. Even had a great ending!! Wow!
I love what you have going here. I have no criticism only some ideas of what went storming through my mind as I listened. About a quarter of the way through there was a lush soundscape that turned into a mental landscape of reds and blues - at this point I envisioned cars or spaceships whooshing past and almost expected to hear this type of sound there. Then once again at about Three Fourth's of the way right before the last drum fill, there is a very playful part - I dreamed a mixture of playful pixies laughing and peeking around trees mixed with the sounds of people laughing and having a good time at a club. Hope this helps.
on funkin off takes time by dliwehtfollac
on Anai(Demo) by ToxicVoltage