Just wow... I am completely blown away with how much this song invokes in me. The whole track, from beginning to end, keeps me completely compelled.
If I had the money to sign you to my label and nationally distribute you, I would so like too. But I'm broke pushing my group Panic Attack's new album, so bleh.
Honestly, i dig this track in the sense, that you probably have a career ahead of you making video game music. It felt as if I was in some cartoonistic cutesy dungeon that then all of a sudden got super serious.
This track reminds me of something you'd hear in a movie when the main characters are freaking out, slightly, on drugs and do something dumb that will effect them later on in the movie.
I dig this track, but I'd work on the hi-hat arrangements. They seem a little clustered.
I actually like your music and i like your raps, but i don't like the way the whole thing is EQed. The vocals are too much sticking out, and then music sounds to much in the back ground.
The singing part needs a tad bit of work.
I dunno, i think what you got can be something spectacular, and if you are going to sell it, you should probably step into a professional studio to record to vocals.
Thanks very much :) I'd say I probably listened to more 90s stuff than anything else so maybe that's why? Thank you for listening, I'm glad you liked it :) ~Lisa
seriously, when it first started, i thought that i was still listening to the halo2 soundtrack... then i heard originality... very fucking nice my man. I love the drums and synth sounds, then tied with your amazing guitar lick, and as some one who loves fucking guitar as much as i do, I'm giving you mad props. You FUCKIN' ROCK!
Well I know the track screams to get a vocal!-) Ive just tried numerous tings and for some reason its not easy to make a good vocal melody for this song. I agree that the song is too long and needs rerecording.
Now I really dislike eminem, with a passion, but I have to say man, you are the FUCKING SHIT! I cannot believe how blown away I was from this track, this is the kind of music I've been looking for years. I cannot wait to get an EP from you man.
Very very nice mix man, I am in love with the way you mix up tracks. You need to put out an EP or LP, shit it could be on 8track and I'd find a way to listen to it.
many thanks, Phill ... i loved making this one and i look forward to properly stretching it out a bit ... still learning here, need to read up on levels and such .. flying blind!
I love the fact that I can come to this community and find brand new and fresh flavor from home brewing artists like myself. I love where this track is going and am totally looking forward to maybe a whole EP just like this!? Nice stuff man, Much love!
I'm bummed that you won't let it up for download, but I'll just have to wait for the album.
The only problem i can see for the track is that I can like, obviously tell which parts where made using fruity loops. But that's probably because i used to rock the shit out of fruity loops.
This track, in its entirety is one of those tear jerking tracks talking about lost brothers or lose in life in general. It is simply amazing and any rapper who thinks they are anywhere near talented... I DARE them to spit something anywhere even close to how much power this song has.
You made a real jem right here man, this beat is so hot and so amazing. The only thing i have against this track is that it peaks too much, some levels are a bit to high, and it peaks in my speakers (and I have a BANGING system).
so tweak the levels a bit and you have FUCKING GOLD!
I like the base of your beat, i like the flow. I'd use different synths, maybe with the higher end things use different Syrus keys. Also, on the parts that are supposed to be the parts where people would rap (not the chorus) I'd break up the main rhythm, like tap it, instead of hold the keys down.
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If I had the money to sign you to my label and nationally distribute you, I would so like too. But I'm broke pushing my group Panic Attack's new album, so bleh.
Nice work man, I LOVE this track
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Good work my man!
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I dig this track, but I'd work on the hi-hat arrangements. They seem a little clustered.
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The singing part needs a tad bit of work.
I dunno, i think what you got can be something spectacular, and if you are going to sell it, you should probably step into a professional studio to record to vocals.
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I know those probably around your influences, but that's what it reminds me of, and I think the track is very nice.
Mix it down a bit, maybe even re-record it with studio quality, and this song would be set to be a hit.
Good Stuff!
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Nice track man, would love to have some of my boys spit some shit over top of it! Nice!
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The only problem i can see for the track is that I can like, obviously tell which parts where made using fruity loops. But that's probably because i used to rock the shit out of fruity loops.
Nice track none the less man, keep it up!
on La vidia by stevie c by steviec
You made a real jem right here man, this beat is so hot and so amazing. The only thing i have against this track is that it peaks too much, some levels are a bit to high, and it peaks in my speakers (and I have a BANGING system).
so tweak the levels a bit and you have FUCKING GOLD!
Good work man, good work, this is solid!
on Club Banger by Fresco
Needs work, but i can see this becoming awesome!