This track definitely has pontential. I think a different sound would suite the Kick better(1:24), it sounds abrasive. Perhaps follow the kick with a snare of some sort. Also I think you should have more of the beat continue after 3:00.
After listening to this I know have just a little bit less anxitey. I can't find anything wrong with this track. The song has a nice flow to it. Nice work.
I enjoyed this. It makes think me of somebody who faces a daily hardship, perhaps a loss and still goes on. I think if you are still concerned about constantly changing this song you should just start a new one, your limiting yourself trying to stay within a certain template.
I have to tell you that you have inspired me to start posting and also creating more music. It's nice to see someone who appreciates and utilizes the strings.
By the way I made an attempt to correct the abrasive beginning of "Night".
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