I agree with (Format) ... Overall solid job. But the verse vocals arent punching through the mix (maybe not compressed enough) - On the other hand the Hook Vox seem over processed. Those could be blended together a little better. Beat wasnt bad. Overall not bad.
I dig it. Definitely a trap vibe. That alarm/siren sound you have in the middle of the track is a bit loud. Seems out of place/doesnt sit well in the beat. But besides that, not bad...
Not bad. I like the punchiness and the 808. Really sounds like a big track. It is a bit distorted... Im sure your going for some distortion there, but sounds maybe a touch over distorted.. Also, the beat doesnt really switch up, its kind of the same thing over and over which doesnt keep the listener intrigued for long periods of time.... Just offering some honest feedback. But Overall I dig it.
Thank you for the honest review to my beat, I made it sound a bit over distorted for a reason but I understand what you mean. I will definitely try to switch it up a lot more next time, thanks for the feedback.
Loving the sci fi vibes. Very cinematic. This really sounds like it could be in a major motion picture. Im not too familiar with this kind of music so i dont have much on the critique/feedback level.. Very nice
Not a bad track. I especially liked the lyrics. I thought the vocals could use more reverb, something to blend it better. Another thing I noticed was the drum loop stayed exactly the same throughout the entire song. Maybe add a part or 2 where the drums cut out briefly to break it up a little bit so it doesnt tire the listeners ear out. Overall pretty clean track
This is unique. I dig it. It had me anticipating, wanting more of it. 808 is punchy and hard, i dig it. Id maybe add something to the beat in the 2nd half of the song just to build the beat up a little bit. Add some drum fills or brief pauses to keep that bounce alive... Vocals werent bad, could use a little shimmer and polish but worked well with the beat. Good stuff
I agree with other commenters, low end can be cleaned up. I wasnt sure where this song was going, doesnt have much of a structure to it ( not necessarily bad ) .. The ending had more energy to it which was a nice buildup i suppose. I was looking for a heavier hip hop kick to this... Overall unique stuff and like the guitar.
I dig it. Sound design is fine, i like the breaks... You have solid compression, and everything hits hard but maybe too much head room? It should be a lot louder than this. (Not that loudness equals better necessarily. Overall pretty solid
Not bad. I assume you made the beat and added this vocal loop? Vocal sounds a lot louder than your beat, you could blend that a bit better. Overall the beats fun, a lot going on with them drum rolls.
Nice chill vibes with a beat that keeps your head bouncing, i like the contrast. Are all the instruments digital, or did you actually record drum and guitar? If I had to critique, the snare sounded real boxy, lot of mid freq buildup, but other than that this was a nice chill listen.
Yeah, I used some stock drums from the FPC Vst and replaced the snare with a kinda crappy sounding one, and layered it with a reverbed snare. I wasnt trying to mix so much so I just left it. The guitar sample I got off this site and all other melodies were in the Nexus 2(Steel drums, bass guitar, piano) or Xpand!2(the ocarina) vsts. Thanks for the listen.
Clean sounding beat. I dig it. Nice progression/sound design. To me the snare was a bit quiet and kind of hid behind the rest of your instrumentation, but im not too familiar with synth wave so I dont know if that was an aesthetic choice, either way. Not a bad mix.
I love the space vibes to this, im all about it. Lot of cool sounds in there. If I would change anything I would watch that mid frequency range in your mix. Sounds a bit boxy, but not bad at all. Good stuff, keep at it!
Hey brother man dont apologize for them drums, theyre nice. We all start somewhere, but you got the lofi thing down swell. Turned into a little lofi trap at the end which was different but the sound is smooth. Good stuff
Interesting... I like it because its different. interesting choice for a kick and snare in this. synthy kick and is that a cymbal for the snare? I like how you broke the beat up in the middle too. not bad
Thanks !
You're right, for the snare i used a cymbal (i think i modified the cutoff), but usually i also put effects like distorsion (from guitar rig).
Thanks for your interest.
Not too shabby.. The bass is kicking heavy and sounds big which is nice... I think you could add some kickers in there to fill the beat out a bit. Not bad tho...
This is nice! High quality track here. Love the sci-fi dark vibe i get from it. A chill rapper would be real cool on this. Im gonna check out some of your other work!
This is pretty clean man. 808s are nice and heavy. I would say perhaps your main sample you use are almost too loud. They should blend nice and even with the drums but the drums almost get buried. Again, sounds clean, though.
Thanks! I just started producing last month, so I have definitely have a lot to learn. I appreciate you specifically pointing out something I can work on too.
This is cool! I like the vibe to this track. I really respect artists who can do it all, in terms of making their own music, writing, singing, etc... Seemed like it was mixed very well too. If your interested in perhaps hopping on a chorus of mine, more on the hip hop side of things, or if your looking for a rapper/vocalist on one of your tracks, keep me in mind! Keep it up bro
Not bad. The beat was pretty unique. I enjoyed it. Your vocals are still super muffled and hard to hear. If your going with that lo-fi sound, thats fine, i would perhaps boost some high end frequencies in the E.Q. to bring out some clarity.
Also from a rap perspective, the flow is fine, but the delivery could use some work. Delivery aka how you deliver your rap. Kinda one-tone, and doesnt change at all throughout the song. Just a couple things to think about! Hit me up if you want further assistance! Keep it up
gewd stuff,much appreciated,, i went back nd(methinks) did all that,m thinkin it at least cleared up the vocals,,
but you're totally right about the flow,,kinda boring,,bousta hyu
I enjoyed this! The overall mix sounds pretty solid. Everything blended together nicely. If im being a critic I would say the vocals were a bit bland, perhaps some more reverb would of evened things out. I really enjoyed the lap steel. Good stuff, overall nice song.
Just so happens my stage name is El Blandido(the Blandit) so that works out good, ha!
I'm not a lead singer so my voice, when i sing, is what you're gonna get. I try my best but i'm not a lead singer. Ya need vocals in songs to work on mixing so I step up to the plate and sing if need be.
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You're right, for the snare i used a cymbal (i think i modified the cutoff), but usually i also put effects like distorsion (from guitar rig).
Thanks for your interest.
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Also from a rap perspective, the flow is fine, but the delivery could use some work. Delivery aka how you deliver your rap. Kinda one-tone, and doesnt change at all throughout the song. Just a couple things to think about! Hit me up if you want further assistance! Keep it up
but you're totally right about the flow,,kinda boring,,bousta hyu
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I'm not a lead singer so my voice, when i sing, is what you're gonna get. I try my best but i'm not a lead singer. Ya need vocals in songs to work on mixing so I step up to the plate and sing if need be.
Just did a quick remix to tighten things up.
Appreciate you stopping and commenting!
Wayne