will share for sure its a banger! this is the song for your schools talent show tho for real lmao you will blow up in your school! Also a lot of your music sounds like X and ski mask etc but there are a few tracks here and there like this one and End up dead. You should focus on that sound more man its dope! And its the new wave too, melodic emo trap is the way dude!
So I listened to this a bit more in the car etc. This is all my opinion and I am just a regular dude so I may be wrong and its your song in the end but these are my thoughts:
1. The vocals seem to be missing depth. Like something with the EQing. They sound a little tinny? idk if that's the right word to use.
2. I love the part at one point where you added vocals in a lower pitch around 1:35. It was one of those moments when you get goosebumps from a track.
3. The producers tag is a bit annoying more than once. maybe take out the BEAAAAAAAAATS after the first time
4. you could switch up to one of the drops if you cut off the music for a bit. For example at 1:16 it would have been dope for the beat to stop and you to go "aye, aye" and then it drops again. Or if you stopped the beat like at the end of the track and then came in with the drop.
5. You could add a bit of a singing "yeeaaah" here and there for example at the end after the hook the last time at like 1:56. It just makes it filled out. Just general adlib type of things here and there if that makes any sense lmao I am trash at explaining anything because I dont really know much.
Of course this is really nitpicking but I listened to the track in my car a lot because I actually do really like it and was just offering all my thoughts on it. And you're only 16 man I wish I was that good right now, let alone at 16 lmao!
Thank you so much for the help man im making the changes rn.
This really helped out dude ill send you the final link if you want when its done.
Probably spotify and soundcloud in a week or 2
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1. The vocals seem to be missing depth. Like something with the EQing. They sound a little tinny? idk if that's the right word to use.
2. I love the part at one point where you added vocals in a lower pitch around 1:35. It was one of those moments when you get goosebumps from a track.
3. The producers tag is a bit annoying more than once. maybe take out the BEAAAAAAAAATS after the first time
4. you could switch up to one of the drops if you cut off the music for a bit. For example at 1:16 it would have been dope for the beat to stop and you to go "aye, aye" and then it drops again. Or if you stopped the beat like at the end of the track and then came in with the drop.
5. You could add a bit of a singing "yeeaaah" here and there for example at the end after the hook the last time at like 1:56. It just makes it filled out. Just general adlib type of things here and there if that makes any sense lmao I am trash at explaining anything because I dont really know much.
Of course this is really nitpicking but I listened to the track in my car a lot because I actually do really like it and was just offering all my thoughts on it. And you're only 16 man I wish I was that good right now, let alone at 16 lmao!
This really helped out dude ill send you the final link if you want when its done.
Probably spotify and soundcloud in a week or 2
on Open Scars by sunnydas01