A complete rap track.
Nice production. very good programing. Above aveage quality.
The raps are perfect. The only thing that rubs me is that the vocal line doesn't quite fit the rhythm. Giz did a great job with vocals. You may want to attempt to alter your track to fit the vox. Do NOT touch the raps. Those are great.
My mind's o-fficially distorted after listening to this track.
I like the tones on the track. Too me, the track's a bit too long.
All the elements and musical parts are cool.
How can i NOT like u?
The music is better than average. U used my sample & TOLD me about it. And, you live in the town my car was born in!
Seriously on the music: you have LOTS of talent. Keep producing and writing more music.
That's what I'm trying to convey... I believe your intent was to "wreck" my spine. You DID wreck my spine. I had a physical reaction to this piece. To me, THAT is what an artist is supposed to do... evoke emotions. YOU did THAT! :)
Your track is not bad... it is pure art & emotion.
I definitely enjoyed this one.
I liked what ever you did to come up with the melody inst and melody rhythm. what ever the stutter thing was... I found that to be cool as sh**!
man, I'm into the tone of the track. Very creative. Viseral. Grungy but cool! Better than grunge.
If you could find a hook, I feel your free-style's got tons of potential.
So far production-wise, this is the best vocal recording technically. No distortion. I suggest you try to make your other vocal recordings sound like this one. I would reduce the the delay/echo on this track.
Who wrote the lyrics to this?
If it is you, sounds like you're on the right track to becoming a pop star. LEARN everything you can about vocal control. I've heard thousands of singers & I feel: You def have potential as a pro. Contact me & I'll explain more if you want.
Peace.
btw... So, far this is your best track IMO.
Has a bit of axel F sound to the synth. I'm not into that much.
That intro's cool and creative.
The drum track is spacious which works well with this track.
Thank you!!!!! For takeing the time to review my track. Thank you !!!! even more for giving me something new to look up. ( axel F) Have on idea what that is.Its not eazy being green . lol
This is very difficult to listen to, BUT I am amazed at how full and loud you made the track. That to me is not easy to do.
This track rubbed me the wrong way. Then again, I'm sure Black Sabbath's music rubbed many people the wrong way at first also.
I understand how "difficult to listen to" it is.
It's not meant to be a soft, ethereal ambient song.
It's meant to be a slightly scary, disturbing piece of drone-noise music.
People said the same thing about black metal, and look how many people over the world listen to that genre now!
So I'm listening to chemical brothers and Daft Punk a bit more lately. YOUR track holds my attention more than theirs does. You are putting out really great music. Thanks for posting this track.
some of the best hip hop tracks I've heard on here. Very authentic. THAT was before I found out you live in my hometown.
Go Stillers. yeah! #43 is the best player... back to music: YOU rock.
I cannot program R&B So when I hear a track like this I get a bit jealous for 3 sec... Then, I enjoy the track.
You're doing a good job especially for only being 21. Keep it up!
I like the sampled feel to this one. Something about a loop that doesn't quite fit in time always seems a bit more sonically interesting to me. Thanks for posting it.
few things...
I didn't hear the other version, but this sounds really good.
On the high-end.. the high freq's didn't bother me.
You can always try a multi-band compressor to tame your mix.
I can't quite make out the chorus. The hook has a good feel.
Production is VERY good!
on zip by ls1sl
I really dig the low volume stuff that comes in around :42.
on Meaning of Life - Remix by shinbaku
I liked the verse vocal & the last 5 seconds with the scratches.
on Underated(T-Mix) featuring Gapjux and Gizella by TerriosOne
Nice production. very good programing. Above aveage quality.
The raps are perfect. The only thing that rubs me is that the vocal line doesn't quite fit the rhythm. Giz did a great job with vocals. You may want to attempt to alter your track to fit the vox. Do NOT touch the raps. Those are great.
on Distorted Mind by NoyzFreek
I like the tones on the track. Too me, the track's a bit too long.
All the elements and musical parts are cool.
on solarstars by smallpaul
on The Next Best Thing Fairytale Feat Louise 2010 by Salkizar
on smooth by brietzmann
The music is better than average. U used my sample & TOLD me about it. And, you live in the town my car was born in!
Seriously on the music: you have LOTS of talent. Keep producing and writing more music.
My car? a porshe 944 ;) too much fun.
what car do you have?
on E-Motion by Sezgin1
on left in winter by young_neat
Keep the tracks coming!
on White Noises by flyindevil
Your track is not bad... it is pure art & emotion.
on MATTERS by phraes
I hope you find what ever it takes to make this one longer. excellent job!
on So What! by C4LLUM
I liked what ever you did to come up with the melody inst and melody rhythm. what ever the stutter thing was... I found that to be cool as sh**!
on Melika by PikeNinja
If you could find a hook, I feel your free-style's got tons of potential.
on The Trouble With Love (MInatory) by Marj
on I'm Just a Girl by Marj
If it is you, sounds like you're on the right track to becoming a pop star. LEARN everything you can about vocal control. I've heard thousands of singers & I feel: You def have potential as a pro. Contact me & I'll explain more if you want.
Peace.
btw... So, far this is your best track IMO.
on Head's Up! by Marj
cute lil track.
on the calling by Prezivor
That intro's cool and creative.
The drum track is spacious which works well with this track.
on What have I Done by Zikanis
you need to add more verses & make a complete song from it.
This is really worth expanding on.
on White Noises by flyindevil
This track rubbed me the wrong way. Then again, I'm sure Black Sabbath's music rubbed many people the wrong way at first also.
It's not meant to be a soft, ethereal ambient song.
It's meant to be a slightly scary, disturbing piece of drone-noise music.
People said the same thing about black metal, and look how many people over the world listen to that genre now!
on Spectator by EpicCrush
on The Anthem by AmnestieProductions
on Sound the Sirens by AmnestieProductions
Go Stillers. yeah! #43 is the best player... back to music: YOU rock.
mto
on Almost Out Of Time by Trakswitcherz
You're doing a good job especially for only being 21. Keep it up!
on Black Magic by lelandchapman
on ConeyIslandRecords VS ShawnLAT by CONEYISLANDRECORDS
I didn't hear the other version, but this sounds really good.
On the high-end.. the high freq's didn't bother me.
You can always try a multi-band compressor to tame your mix.
I can't quite make out the chorus. The hook has a good feel.
Production is VERY good!