Hey on paper I love the idea but you lost me at the flow and the lyrics are too harsh. I know the feeling cause on one of my songs I had release a few years back was a message about haterz but it crossed that line of too angry. So the first lyrics were alittle bit harsh
Michael! Thank you so much for bring up the content, that was the one thing I wrestled with the whole time.
That's why I intentionally put in lyrics like
"...that deserved an lol...I just be playing I'm sure you can tell..." then I ended the bridge on a softer note after that 2nd verse.
Like'if I made a budget with my schedule you won't get any days' lol, that's such a weak diss, if anything I was hoping it wasn't too mushy.
But again good observation, it really wasn't a "hater" message it was just a fun idea I came up as the name of the instrumental on YouTube is "Heart" so I thought Heart Emoji.
PS: this is just part 1 or a 2 part series I'm doing for valentines day, the 2nd one is much more all the way "mushy" but it's supposed to be for valentines day so it makes sense.
Sorry about the paragraphs and essays man, that question is something I legit thought about so I got excited when I saw your comment. Thanks for your feedback!
Wow it’s been a while since I heard a ska track lol. I think it sounds good man I will say personally the mix is a little hard for me to swallow but all in all a thumbs up
thanks a lot michael, i used google translate for the meaning but i didn't understand all in fact! however, the comment seems to be positive! thanks a lot for the feedback :)
I like it I just think it needs more layers. Especially future bass it’s a producers genre so that means all the little Easter eggs as it were you put into the song the more interesting it will be.
I might use for fun here’s my soundcloud Incase I do upload it http://soundcloud.com/Mayo-music my website Incase you want to collab itsmichaelmayo.com
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That's why I intentionally put in lyrics like
"...that deserved an lol...I just be playing I'm sure you can tell..." then I ended the bridge on a softer note after that 2nd verse.
Like'if I made a budget with my schedule you won't get any days' lol, that's such a weak diss, if anything I was hoping it wasn't too mushy.
But again good observation, it really wasn't a "hater" message it was just a fun idea I came up as the name of the instrumental on YouTube is "Heart" so I thought Heart Emoji.
PS: this is just part 1 or a 2 part series I'm doing for valentines day, the 2nd one is much more all the way "mushy" but it's supposed to be for valentines day so it makes sense.
Sorry about the paragraphs and essays man, that question is something I legit thought about so I got excited when I saw your comment. Thanks for your feedback!
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