A fairly long track, but you manage to keep it varied and intereseting, so you don't get bored while listening, which is quite an achievement for a 7 minute + song! I agree with n0mad in that it would be excellent if you added in another melody on top that stands out against what you have already.
on The beat of live by sanderxd
on EuNegMa - productioN by EuNegMa
Keep up the good work,
Chiisu
on Silence WIP by Kazm
Peace.
Kii.