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bobbyhalldorson

bobbyhalldorson

omaha, United States
Joined : 4th Oct 2009 - 15 years ago
bobbyhalldorson comments on tracks

bobbyhalldorson has posted 32 comments on other peoples tracks.

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bobbyhalldorson
bobbyhalldorson 10th Jul 2010 20:01 - 14 years ago

on tyson by IllestSTYLEZ
wasssup wit it ae dats a sick beat. It's got a scott storch thang goin on wit da strings.
bobbyhalldorson
bobbyhalldorson 29th May 2010 06:20 - 14 years ago

on Horrorcore-Rap-Beat - CONSPIRACY by abaex
wassup wit it ae da drums were straight but da verses and chorus could of had more instruements in it. I liked how you mixed da beat up dat was another good part. The last part had a fade out with da insrtuement but what you could try to do is fade it out with an automation clip. Good job on da beat doe.
bobbyhalldorson
bobbyhalldorson 26th May 2010 05:13 - 14 years ago

on I ..... 2009! by ProfitzBeatz
wassup wit it ae it sounds like your beats are gettn better. Good job on da beat how you mixed it up. I would try to make it longer atleast 3.30 minutes if you can. Usually people have a instruement that distinguishes da chorus but you don't always have to do it like dat.
ProfitzBeatz
ProfitzBeatz replied Unknown
thanx and i'll take your suggestions into considerations
bobbyhalldorson
bobbyhalldorson 24th May 2010 05:15 - 14 years ago

on BEAUTIFULL(The fresh Rmx) by freshB0y
wassup wit it ae da vocals were clean and da beat sounded good. Good job on da production. Da chorus sounded straight wit da lyrics.
bobbyhalldorson
bobbyhalldorson 21st May 2010 07:34 - 14 years ago

on LOOKING INTO MY DAUGHTER EYES by ForThaAfterLifeProD
wassup wit it sick beat and lyrics. Dats how people are pose to rap dats all I gotta say. Da beat could of been longer but it's all good. good job on da song.
ForThaAfterLifeProD
ForThaAfterLifeProD replied Unknown
thx good look it but i just cut at the 1st vs. they hole track done thx on telling me thats how you are pose to rap alot of people tell me i rap like d.m.x.
bobbyhalldorson
bobbyhalldorson 21st May 2010 07:19 - 14 years ago

on the cauldron was simmering by Danzel415
wassup wit it ae da beat was sick. Its got dat old school drum beat and has some chinese swag on it. Good job on da beat. Da only thing I would do is add more sounds if you can.
bobbyhalldorson
bobbyhalldorson 20th May 2010 01:59 - 14 years ago

on Dembow peligrosa by Dembow
wassup wit it ae dats a good regae beat. I wasn't expecting da beat to sound dat good wit synths. Usaully I hear guitars and other instruements. If you got any tips on how to make reggae beats let me know. good job on da beat.
bobbyhalldorson
bobbyhalldorson 20th May 2010 01:27 - 14 years ago

on Fiiind LOVE by t0MMYgUNNZ
wassup wit it da beat sounds good but its too short for me. It's a good sample for a track. Tracks are usually 3.30 minutes atleast to get played on da radio. I think you should have da fiind love in da chorus and rap on da verses. Or you could have a girl singing on a verse and you raping on a verse. Dat's what I would do though.Good job on da beat.
bobbyhalldorson
bobbyhalldorson 17th May 2010 23:47 - 14 years ago

on Another Dying Day by acide
wassup wit it ae da piano sounds off beat. Da beat sounds sick doe but it doesn't go good together with da drums. Im feeln da sound and how you mixed up. Good job on da beat.
acide
acide replied Unknown
yeah I know Im going to fix that sometime soon. thanx for the listen and your honest opinion.
bobbyhalldorson
bobbyhalldorson 12th May 2010 20:35 - 14 years ago

on momentum by 1eyedoneder
wassup wit it ae what i would do is change da title to somethin you say in da chorus. Try to make da song longer if you can atleast 3.30 minutes.Da flows are good keep tryna come up wit more similies and metaphours to compare ish.Vocals sound clean good work on da song.
bobbyhalldorson
bobbyhalldorson 28th Apr 2010 17:33 - 14 years ago

on You Know The Deal by shortyone74
wassup wit it ae da beat was sick it sounded like a diplomats beat. Da lyrics were straight too.
shortyone74
shortyone74 replied Unknown
thanks bro. that was one of the best beat this producer has ever made
bobbyhalldorson
bobbyhalldorson 26th Apr 2010 19:07 - 14 years ago

on The Slope by ShiftyFellow
wassup good job on da mixing and da vocals. Da vocals went together good in da chorus and in da verses. Keep making good beats.
bobbyhalldorson
bobbyhalldorson 25th Apr 2010 07:16 - 14 years ago

on STAND UP by COACH
wassup dem vocals sound good but I wasn't feeln da beat. Da song sounded more like freestyle. Keep working on da beat and chorus and makin it longer. Da only thing I would say about da vocals is try to relate to movies, artist, or anything you can compare when rapping.
bobbyhalldorson
bobbyhalldorson 22nd Apr 2010 19:27 - 14 years ago

on girl i miss u by donmega
wassup yea dem vocals have a couple parts were theres static. It's a good track doe. Dam your almost ready to sell your ish on cds.
donmega
donmega replied Unknown
thanks for being honest, its not young highs clearest song but the more songs u hear the better it gets i promise equipment problems when i first made a song but fixed now
bobbyhalldorson
bobbyhalldorson 22nd Apr 2010 17:35 - 14 years ago

on Street classic by FloridaboyFlava
wassup wit it ae I would make a instruement for da chorus and add another instruement to the verse.definately needs to be longer.Da drums sound good with the snares and the toms.Da beat sounds like a basic layout but add more sounds,bass, and maybe a break and it would sound a lot better. Good job on da beat doe it sounds sick.
FloridaboyFlava
FloridaboyFlava replied Unknown
ayo thanx mane i made a better version but its 2 large of a file 2 put looperman.but good lookin out doE.
bobbyhalldorson
bobbyhalldorson 17th Apr 2010 01:32 - 14 years ago

on Nightime Listening Full Version by yeshintae
wassup da trombone,piano and strings were sick wit it. the only thing I would do is make it longer.keep making dem beats.
yeshintae
yeshintae replied Unknown
Thanks for the review bro.
I'll be sure to keep making them

Keep on the lookout
i'm working on a project with ChrissG (profile two reviews below)
check his stuff out too

Respect from LA
bobbyhalldorson
bobbyhalldorson 17th Apr 2010 01:15 - 14 years ago

on Work It Out or Break It Out by vstarz
wassup wit it im feeln da track.I like how you got da chorus and the arrangement. It seems like da song should be longer. good job on da beat.
bobbyhalldorson
bobbyhalldorson 16th Apr 2010 05:34 - 14 years ago

on Ambitionz by Masta_KS
wassup wit it dis track is good for freestyles like a rap battle or if your practicing in your room.To me a beat has to have a chorus doe for it to sound like a song. What I would do is have another instruement for da chorus for 8bars 4 bars repeating. When i read a book from a A and R person he said in hip hop you should have 4 bars repeating for da chorus and at da end have three choruses repeating. Dat would be 12 bars all together for da last chorus. Dats one way to make a song people use different techniques.You're doing good doe.
bobbyhalldorson
bobbyhalldorson 15th Apr 2010 20:51 - 14 years ago

on Bounce(sold) by RonG251
wassup wit ya yea da track was killn em. I would try to make it longer doe atleast 3:30 and longer if someone else is spittin on it.
bobbyhalldorson
bobbyhalldorson 15th Apr 2010 20:29 - 14 years ago

on The Dramatics by KillaKeishh
wassup wit it dat track is sick. You are good for a beginer it took me two years to get my beats sounding decent. Da track has a good amount of variation and it sounds like a club beat.dats wassup keep makin dem beats.
KillaKeishh
KillaKeishh replied Unknown
thanks!! yea i've had fl demo for about a year & some time but I never really got a chance to figure things out but thanks for the feedback!!
bobbyhalldorson
bobbyhalldorson 22nd Mar 2010 04:22 - 14 years ago

on MMASTER - Special Girl (Prod. - IBoBeatz) by IBoBeatz
wassup wit ya ae dem vocals and da beat sounds sick. What I would do doe is make da song loner if you can. Wit da flows I would use more similes and metaphours cuz dat makes people sound more professional. It's still good doe and you can realate to movies or famous artist. That's like quoting ish in essays for english class.
IBoBeatz
IBoBeatz replied Unknown
thank you for your advice. i will take that to heart.

cheers
bobbyhalldorson
bobbyhalldorson 21st Feb 2010 18:09 - 15 years ago

on A MILLION TEARS FEAT MALCOLM LEWIS by raporia
wassup wit it dis track right here is sick wit da drums,vocals,and strings.killn em doe,keep making dem sick tracks.real vocals and good beats make a hit.
raporia
raporia replied Unknown
many more where this came from,u can buy this now from raporia.com with all funds raised going to cancer
bobbyhalldorson
bobbyhalldorson 21st Jan 2010 11:31 - 15 years ago

on i know you like it by wayne23virigina
wassup wit it da track was killn em but you should add some vocals to da verses. da outro was good usually i put an automation clip on it but it sounds better. I was feeln da chorus good work.
bobbyhalldorson
bobbyhalldorson 21st Jan 2010 10:39 - 15 years ago

on How We Roll by goky
wassup wit it da track was hittin hard.What you could do is make the last five to ten seconds have a automation clip and fade the song out.I don't know if you had one but you can have a break to spice the beat up. I put my break in between the third verse. keep makin dem sick beats!
goky
goky replied Unknown
i dont know how to make the fade in-out thing when i was doin this beat. I dont wanna change the original one so its ending is not good i know but im tryin to make better endings in my new beats. Thanks for review
bobbyhalldorson
bobbyhalldorson 17th Jan 2010 16:01 - 15 years ago

on Mrs 2009 by ProfitzBeatz
wassup wit it da track is hot like halapenos but i didn't here the chorus. The chorus should have another instrament playing for 8 bars and the verses should be 8-12-16. Nice work on da beat doe it sounds good.
ProfitzBeatz
ProfitzBeatz replied Unknown
thanx ....i usally do break the beat but i was being lazy and just let it loop lol....but thanx my friend 1
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