Dear It is an good Attempt...you have tried a bit style of U2 "Where the Streets have no name" but it seems the track is becoming monotonous after some time try some bridges and verse parts to break monotony....All the best
yea ..i was just havin fun,,,not really a trackk..it was done on a loop pedal for guitar...check out this link..you tube
Just uploaded a xmas song..check it out.....
on loop jam by Dvibe
Just uploaded a xmas song..check it out.....
http://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/49848
http://www.youtube.com/user/hondomax